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07-06-03, 03:50 AM | #1 | |||||||
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thru my wire..check it...real new
IP: 3F30 0CDB
thru my wires
thru my wires, my whole life is explained/ from when i feel happi, to when i feel drained/ thru my wire, my whole life is let out, n reaveled/ information come out that for ages has been concealed/ but inside a me, i still have my own dark rooms/ cant ever take a break, try n put life on pause, but it always seems to resume/ had twoparents, father from the country, and moms from the city/ both bore one kid who as dark as p.diddy/ 2 parents, from dominican republic, middle of the carribean/ still remember in 96, hurricane george sent everything into olbivion/ grew up in the pj's, been here for 14, been here since he was one/ but before him, moms had another cat n bore one son/ became his olda brotha, jose, now he 21 years old/ who had his taste of racism, but no matta wut he stood bold/ but this kid ralfy, was real energetic, like the energizer bunny/ times was hard, cuz the fam aint have to much money/ he jumped, ran, n liked to go on explorations/ 2 cuzins tommy, n kevin, his closets relations/ he grew up good, went to public school, n now in catholic/ been called many names, like blacky even tho he was his-panic/ adversity comes his way, every so often/ sometimes he feel like hidden away, or dien in a coffin/ many people crossed my path, from dealers, to assholes, to beauty's n bitches/ was in the hospital for 3 dayz, cuz doctors feared my nitely twitches/ thought i was sick minded n suffered from siezures/ does all this shyt, but onli when he time is liezure/ from playin ball, to chillen, to speakin his mind/ sorta like this song, tryna put his life in line/ see, i always dreamed a bein a star/ always knew it was in my reach, never 2 far/ at times, i wanted to be a track star, or another bill gates/ who have so much money, he would have gold plated plates/ but now i like basketball better, wanna be like tracy mcgrady/ been workin hard at the game, but it has yet to pay me/ it comin thru now, but i also wouldnt mind being mr.music, the next jay-z/ the nigga that'll have ur head poppin, n have the ladies screamin like crazy/ dominican down to my viens, that neva changed/ my whole life in a nutshell i just explained/ from tiffany, geraldine, shani, all my x gurlz/ but then there was ashley, my first luv in this world/ got many emotional scars cuz of gurlz but its all good/ still keep on striven in my fucked up hood but then i got my #1. people, from jen to james/ 4 years deep nigga! n cot-fuckin-damn u still aint change/ from the drama with ic, to shani n em/ notice how we bounce from crew to crew thats full of feminine/ lol, its been real funny, all i can do now is laugh/ have made many choices, thnk God, i've chosen the right path/ got nothin more to say, just hope, God gonna grant me many many more years/ that i aint stuck in a office, with a boring as career/ said a lot, thru these wires holdin each one of my teeth/ my fingers also spoke for me, the truths been unleashed/ 1 the signifigance of the wire thing..is that i have braces lol |
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07-06-03, 10:24 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 544C C83C
i love this poem....it was different...it seemed like your voice was coming through my speakers....conversing....tellin your life story....another reason i like this is because it sounds like something my brother would write....lol ...
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07-07-03, 11:28 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 640C 3FBD
Honestly, I wasn't so sure about reading all that. Sometimes it sucks to read something long that isn't good. But once I got into it, I liked it.
You told a good story about your life, the friends you have, family, and what you hope to be one day. I liked reading this a lot. I'd give you tips on how to get better but I don't think this should be changed at all. You wrote pretty good here. I'm glad I did take the time to read all of it Keep posting.. |
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