SuMMeR.


Heavenly blue skies,
parties thrown by a host
got Girls and Budweiser,
im taking the Tops off both.
Guys showboat and flex,
As sweat forms and grows -
The suns rays leave 'em with Red Necks like Country folk.
Whats funny though,
is people dont get why its my faverite season
theres blondes in bikini's -
Geez!, do i need more of a reason?!
Suns keeping em tanned,
their in need of something cold
but if they dont like Ice Cream,
well. . i'll let 'em lick my Cone.
Back home,
having water fights with watering cans
Summers the season of youth,
enjoy it while you can.

Ya, this piece a'ight...7/10... hey yo, dawg, could u check my Opens?

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Yo feedback wou' be apprecieted...thx.

Will Do. .

Blah, You Sloth Ticklers. .

i think this was good different but a woth reading peace no doubt

haha...dope shit bro....a typical UK summer......i think it needed more than 7/10 Gangsta One...!!

what mo can i say Cam....peace..!!

Thank You, E Z!

^ I also liked that line.. lol

This was a good read. A lot better than most of the other pieces in this forum. Kept me entertained and interested. Good job on that..

Smooth flow kept me in it the whole time.. I liked this piece.

Stay up..
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You came slick on this one... kinda short but definately nice.

^ Werd, Cheers For The Indepth Replies, Lol. .

diffrent.......but still nice homie. i would give this about a 7.5/10 keep elevatin.
peace

yeah this was diffrent
laid back style and shit to it.. remind me of ol' school snoop
stay up kid
peep my piece feat. rythmic tendicies called 110% remix

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^ lol.

Decent Drop Dawg, It Flowed Killer, Could Have Used Some More Complex Vocab, But it's Nice To Keep Some Things Simple..You Had Mad Wordplay In Here, Specially The Budwiser Line

Overall: Deserved More Than A 7.8/10!