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Old 07-08-03, 02:25 AM   #1
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this makes no sense at all

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im just using this tread to store some shit i wrote in a chatroom cypher. you can read it if you want to, ima come back with a notepad later and write down the tight stuff. laterz.

jury swayed, in favour of the motion of spitting/
we duly paid, this slickness of the lotion is dripping/
no style swicthing, from now until the end of time/
my thoughts through the cosmos, kids im sending mine/
defend your mind, the right attack can bend your spine/
sharper than a man who got a porcupine to lend a spine/

im on the run like ras kass, reaching to blast/
im the profession in the shit and im teaching the class/
first part is rhythm the second is rhyming/
the third is to mix em tight with perfect timing/

they might bleed fast? they cats are amoebas/
single brain cells coz they dont train well/
look heres the details, over there are the females/
in room 213 is a cloud of smoke, the c-smell/

no hell, we've been through the see through/
i serve punchlines to your mouth just to feed you/
i think females never rap, coz they aint got the abilties/
and legally they could find their last will in me

bringing it back, i push weight like im slinging a yak/
across denmark, my pen sparks when im singing a track/
so swing with me cats, on a 1,000 mile mission/
scientists call me lazy coz my works have "gone fission"/
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Old 07-08-03, 05:59 AM   #2
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you had some ill multies... and ya flow is similar to minez...but you was right...it don't make no sense...
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Old 07-08-03, 06:27 AM   #3
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Yeah, Even For Chatroom Cypher's This Was Dope!

Whuy Do You not Drop Pieces That Often On Open Mic?
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Old 07-08-03, 09:41 AM   #4
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yep, it made no sense, but the multis' were cool
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Old 07-08-03, 10:44 AM   #5
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hmm....the rhymes are good i mean it fitted some but *scratches head* WTF??? I DONT GET IT!

but yeah ..the fact that in cypherin it doesnt really have to make sense ya kno..cuz it usually spits whats in our minds and just go with the flow...all u think about is that it rhymes and it fits the verse before u...

anyways...the lines were good ..got good multies...rhyme scheme was tight...but the whole content was BLAH!..hehe

nice drop tho!
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