why do i try to conqure hip hop,wen its always full of money grabbers//
they try to dig inside ya pocket like the goverment with mind tappers//
our bretherin in the hoods aint got a chance so they turn to clappin//
they try to get good and dance like they free,but they still gang banging//
bang marvine cuz pay ups late,wen the studio bosses bang us for time//
and wen we talk about our problems in the nation,the goverment say we lying//
bitches jus wine and dine and then some,just to take some of us for granted//
they shop-till-they-drop,go out to spend some,give us a label and leave us branded//
slap bitch both hands,im jus all right,left handed smackin' should stop her habbit//
thank fuck i aint got no credit cards cuz bills wud travel far and reach other planets//
from hoes-to-taxes,bills-to-rent money i got no idea how we all survive//
from all the money we get taken from our hands its hard to believe that im alive//
if all the guning in the streets wont kill a man,then money will//
i remeber times wen old folks told me,to make some cash,ya gota have skills//
then why the fuck am i ready to kill,gun in my hand awaiting orders//
like im some pro from the C.I.A with bills to pay in diffirent borders//
i saw new shoes,but cant afford em,cuz i had no cash to sboil my self//
like many say wen they got no shit,if i got no money,atleast' got my health//
whats that if its deteriorating,hating myself,cuz i'v always been told i'v always failed//
im always wonderin,debating myself,on if i boarded lifes boat,did it ever sail//
so grab a glass,cuz ur all gona get raped,get ur hard earnd money stolen from ya hands//
while ya makin a measily hundred dollaz,ya bigg azz bosses keeping a hundred grandz//

nice drop i liked the flow

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damn....is it bed time allready.....cuz i see yall sleepin....uppin..!!

ohh...and thanx bro....^^^^^^^

Lol. Yea bro. Nice Drop.

Good Flow, try upp'n yo vocab a lil mo. But, other than that nice word use "WordPlay" and Metas.

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=65207t now bro. Slept on.

aight thanx man....and iv allready cheked it....peace...

ANY MORE FEED'BACK peeps..!!?? c'mon...i like gave my opinion onabout 12 drops in the last 10 mins.....and yall been online....and i only got 2 back....plus iv asked yall in your shit to give opinions on this 1......whats up yall.......

c'mon...were the mods at....this shits bananas....

yo nice drop finally got around to readin it, like that one kat said better vocab.....keep elevating dawg...............

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yo...more feedback...!?

no doubt dawg it was ill, i can definately relate to the meaning ur trying to get across and thanx for the post on mine....
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aight thanx man....any more bretherins..?? ya know....i did give feed back on alot more....and they were very point-full...!!

yea, 4 real... nice, had a nice bangin' flow too it an' ya stuck on topic.. up your vocab an' you'll be ill.. 1

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yeah thanx bro...!!