YO MY BOY DIED 2 YEARS BACK 4TH OF JULY 2001 I HAD 2 GIVE HIM A SHOUT OUT I WROTE IT A YEAR AGO BUT FOUND MY RYME BOOK AND DECIDED 2 POST U A PAGE


I KNOW ITS BEEN A LONG TIME BUT I WANNA SAY GOODBYE/
COULDN'T DO BEFORE I BROKE DOWN AND CRIED/
FALLEN SOLDIER MAN U WERE A REAL GOOD FRIEND/
COULN'T BELIEVE WEN UR LIFE JUS CAME TO AN END/
I JUS WALKED ON SAT AT THE BACK OF THE CLASS/
MAN I WAS HURT MY TEARS FELL FAST/
TRIED FOR OVER A YEAR COULDN'T WRITE THIS BEFORE/
COULD'T STAND THE FACT YOU AINT HERE NO MORE/
1ST DEATH ANNIVERSARY I MET UR MOM/
I RESPECT HER COS SHE REALISES LIFE GOTTA GO ON/
BUT IM GON MOURN U TILL I JOIN U THATS THE REST OF MY LIFE/
WOT HURTS MOST IN THREE YEARS ITS HAPPENED TO ME TWICE/
YEAR SIX GOD TOOK ANOTHER ONE TO BE WITH HIM/
STILL FELS LIKE UR WITH US SOMEWHERE WITHIN/
BUT I KNOW/ I GOTTA LET U GO/
I WONT CRY/BUT LET ME SAY VANDAN GOODBYE/

I REALISE THE LACK OF VOCAB AND WORDPLAYS AND SHIT BUT ITS COS I WAS BASICLY WRITIN MY FEELINS WHICH IS WOT RAP IS TO ME

PEACE

HOT SHIT TWIN THIS WAS CONCIOUS AND EMOTIONAL TIGHT NIT

THANKS MAN

that was deep man, sad stuff,
feelings are what make a good piece

good shit dog thats what rapping is about ya mean real life if ya piece comes from inside no one can doubt on it
R.I.P. to all our fallen soldiers

Da,m..............deep shit man............keep spittin that............

it looks just liek my piece witgh Zainy peep it

Letter for the Deceases

YO THATS DEEP STUFF MAN LIVE ON
R.I.P. 2 ANY TRUE NIGGAZ THAT PASSED AWAY

Shiznit's Thoughts:

not much to say in here...but the fact the u expressed such great emotion on this piece and reflected it over something personal...it really stood out in a sense that u highly respect and commemorate people that are close to ur heart and dedicating this piece to them...props!

Taking all the facts and emotions and putting them together..that makes a good piece...i wasnt really feelin the flow cuz its kinda off and the vocabs are edgy but the content and passion of this piece made me like it..nice job!

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that was nice

r.i.p. to ur nigga