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Old 07-26-03, 04:21 PM   #1
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Inside My Mind (Remix)

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Bx_Renegade:
Look deep inside myself
check conditions of the soul
rethinkin about lessons taught about Christ Himself
Think twice before movin without help
Look at the life Iv'e run through
I'm Hispanic, from the gutter, and I'll make it
Breakin white society rules
People live just to see others fail
Roots from my mind spring from thoughts
like inspiration perceived through my retina
into my brain into the endless labriynth
I have built for myself
But into a lab for testing
see if it's real
If it passes the test it is put into work
I open up my book
My mind creates a vision
and i begin to write
work up a beat and flow
my words i start to recite
beautiful imagery is what i hope i bring
happiness automatically paints a picture
of flowers and birds that sing
my muscles begin to work
through my body
a million messages are sent
speed is so quick to determine
how from the brain to a cell
to my hand and then to begin to write
Words, truly felt from my heart


Bx_Renegade: Re Re Re Re Remix!!!!!!!!!!!


Bash :
Heavily intoxicated, staggering slightly straight still
Heavily soiled with streams of tears pouring from an 'internal spill'
Hard for me not to get lost in the glare of your eternity,
Hard for me to realize that your skin is only earthly;
My Anthology was Getting Played like a game of Manopoly"/
Why can't this be tactile, to ease my nerves?
Why does it seem real; all the cuts and curves?
Wishing time would unveil this mystery, I play with my imagination until I go insane.
Commiting Suicide , Submiting Crimes inside my Mind"/
Now I toss down my sword and refuse to fight;
Now; my conscious craves more of this groovy delight,
As my path shines through your compass eyes, pointing north into my brain;
The lone soldier stands on his mountain of fear~//
with blood soiled finger wipes the cold tear ~/
can feel myself falling apart
my life is fading away and drifting as i watch
im falling deeper and deeper into myself
getting lost in people's thoughts

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Old 07-26-03, 06:44 PM   #2
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Uppin this
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Old 07-26-03, 10:08 PM   #3
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Old 07-27-03, 06:22 AM   #4
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I HAVE TO SAY Nice collabo going in here feel the rhytm....fo realz

but i have to say this wus also some kinda open mic...but nice drop
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Old 07-27-03, 08:18 PM   #5
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Oh i see. Bash played off BX_renegade's piece.

Nicely done. A bit over-done at times. but still, nicely done.

Er, that's all i got to say really.

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Old 07-30-03, 12:58 AM   #6
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its nice good collab n i was feeling the flow n t was kinda over done in some spots but nice drop
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