10 linez maximum no dick ridin u split first

u know make it a lil better ill make it 25 lines max. go

fine ill go 1st .

fanfavorite cudnt buy a vote if he stuck a gun to ya throat//
anxious for blazing you, quick cuz ya games a hoax//
you’ll never win… this veteran’s vicious//
ya teams coming apart at the seams like tearin stitches//
preparin sick shit to flip on you dip shits//
makaveli is to sick scripts… as a piece is to clips bitch//
always unloading, foreboding to the fullest//
that dis cat an his verse will be sweating bullets//
but I aint gotta pack steal… that’s fa rill//
FAns getin weak in the knees when I flash the skill//
this Sav is ill… you’ll loose against him//
cause whenever there’s a bone to pick, I’m sick like rheumatism/
you can’t touch this… so ya better give a fuck quick//
when I bust this… I’m goin all out like ya luck is//
my language grips… to entertain the masses//
you’re a lame that spits shit that’s plain wackness//
never blast shit, cause you aint filled with villainy//
and this outcomes no doubt son… so the suspense aint even killin me//
DA finisher____the merkin in progress
ya know im ya hero fan favorite be real//
in the Gravity of this situation… you’ll get ya weak flow revealed//
ya know mak is skilled, and my words are is the same//
all combatants hit the canvass when we cave in ya brain//
avoid this or soon… ya room’s decorated in anatomy//
be mad at me… cause savagery’s how I defy Gravity//

Enough talkin about tricks and games ...you lame//
we about to talk the tricks I play with ya dame//
You aint no I 'm from New York dog battle me you fuckin insane//
Defying gravity like ya chick upside down giving me brain//
Somebody needs to give this patient a bed pan//
because I got no respect I'll piss on ya like a young Kelly fan//
I took on MC's bigger than you so you aint hard to carry//
Judging from ya battle stupid what you use a dictionary//
Niggas hear merked and now you think you a gangsta//
Hearing ya battle dog I got tougher clothes that I iron to put on a hanger//
Dog you aint a winner or this aint a hoax//
how you gonna be a vet with 27 posts (stupid nigga)//
Dog I don't care if you shot 10 clips at me cause you a hoe//
Knowing if I gave you the tickets you'll bring ya hoe to the show//
Basically I aint about to write another rhyme//
cause time is money and you are wasting my time//

aight uppin this shit. uppin

hit this up with an honest vote, aight? i cant vore though......but imma give yall some hightlights

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65419

preparin sick shit to flip on you dip shits//
makaveli is to sick scripts… as a piece is to clips bitch//

now psycho sir.....that was hott......im feeling that......nice job.....BUT.........

Dog you aint a winner or this aint a hoax//
how you gonna be a vet with 27 posts (stupid nigga)//

that was fuckin tight......sorry i couldnt vote on this one.......but you guys both came hott......im out

aight still uppin

the unknown took it betta punches props 2 both tho im out holla

peep mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1277#post621277

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Huh china.

yo psycotic....hott shit dawg.....i think u had betta lines n shit....yea dat unknown character had u when he said dat shit bout hoax/ post/ but yo u had more punches n e waiz.....i vote psycotic.....one

ima go wit psychotic on dis one. nice flow n' punches good job

yo psyco looks like ur runnin scared. i posted our battle. so lets go. u gotta big mouth lets see if u can back it up

ima go wit psychotic on dis one. nice flow n' punches good job

yo pychotic hot shit dogg rap's crazy man keep it up dirty, props to both though
Vote=Pychotic

hit up my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65697

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Perfection will be promised in time.

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