6 bars or 12 lines
no hate d/r votes
u spit first

ill spit asap after u aight im out holla

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Huh china.

I said you spit first in the PM, but whatever, it's cool, I'll spit soon, I'm checking in...........

You say you're the ShowStoppa, because that's what always happen,
The crowd gotta evacuate when you start rappin'.
You couldn't stop the heat during a solar eclipse,
You wouldn't even be a dominator with ten-thousand whips.
You bite lines like a pickpocket, hiding them deep underneath,
You couldn't bite well if you were a huge pair of teeth.
Not even in your dreams could you imagine spitting like me,
You rap so bad, you were censored by the F.C.C..
Your style is so old, it gets Social Security,
The Pope couldn't even come in and cleanse your impurity.
So here's my closer, and it's your turn to rhyme,
But to elevate to me, It's Mt. Everest you'll need to climb.

that was hot man.......nice flow......waiting for dashowstoppa to drop...........but i cant even vote anyways.......that rule kind of sucks..............one

my rhymes are "poisionus" like hyoscyamine fluid and "sulfuric acid"//
I spit "methan gas" for fun keep messin wit me kid youll get ur ass kicked//

Ill "rip" out ur "eyes" so u can "see" the dangers of "versin me"//
my flows kill "mentally" and "physically"//

Ill spit a "hydrogen bomb" at u and make ur body "fry"//
the "violent flows" from which I spit create "fusions of nuclei"// (atomic bombs)

Ill lyrically "hurt" u givin u "two cuts a bar" trick//
when u done reading my shit youll be "countin 12 cuts on ya body" bitch//

im a "lyrical assassin" i "snipe" niggas like u and "end ya life"//
fuckin wit me u get "one chance to live" nigga "think twice"//

u think u spit hot shit cus u into "keystyle"//
u wack as hell u dont even kno the "fundamentals of freestyle"//

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Huh china.

aight uppin fo votes (1) drop a link and we ll peep urs

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Huh china.

DaShowStoppa2 had better wordplay, metas, flow, the other dude, your punches hit about as hard an 8 year old girl...

VOTE=DASHOWSTOPPA2

thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (2) drop a link and we'll peep urs

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Huh china.

I gotta go with Rory Breaker on this...

The other guy had some very complex stuff, but none of it really hit very hard.
I mean...the first line he used all that scientific lingo, but killed the punch line by going elementary with "ass-kicked"
Same with the "hydrogen bomb" bar...all that scientific shit and what was the punch in there?
"make ya body fry" (simple)
And the whole "lyrical assassin" bar was advice, not a diss.

Rory made his stuff hit and made it funny to read with amusing metas and wordplay.

I liked it.

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showstappa.......vote.......
yo vocab had this
n punches hit hard

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=65675
^^ said you would peep this up please do

w0rd...

return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1389#post621389

thanks fo votin and thanks fo da advice born ima take dat shit into consideration on my next battles 2 come but thanks fo votin yall uppin fo mo votes (3)

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Huh china.

im goin wit showstoppa made me laugh real hard the other didnt i wasnt feelin his verse

vote-showstoppa

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thanks fo votin uppin fo mo votes (4)

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Huh china.