Dee dub aka w-e-s-t kikin it with y g swoop aka yung gee,u.k to u.s it's goin down let's go see/
fukin with tha w-e-s-t gone be a drama,i'll fuk u,ur gurl and ur mutha fukin moma/
u best play ur position in tha background,or like tha rock i'm gonna have to lay tha smack down/
menage e toi is how i play it,clock a nice ass bitch and i'm gone play it and lay it/
attention! me and yung gee swoop are on tha mic,guarenteed to get u unbalanced even fallin of a trike/
this is one phat ass neptunes style beat,burnin it up lika pheonix with unlimited heat/
yo swoop is this a battle or is this just a game,i'm gone pass u tha ball - you gone rattle association don't bring ya fame/
and when i freestyle i'm in constant fear,but when i relax and i spit like windolene - crystal clear/
yo this hot ish is jus a starter,i'ma critisise and fuk it i'll make u a marter/
u comin to tha end of tha road,but remember westy is a friend and not a foe/
and we need to do this shit more often,ma heat is cuttin through ur butter rhymes and they bout to soften/
yo i aint no playa or a pimp,but fuk with me u gettin left like tha pulp fiction gimp/
i'm a popular cool layed back mutha fucka,you an angry depressed suicidle trucka/
only games i be playin is sports,no time for fukin round and gettin due dates for coarts/
impression u be gettin from me is good,take inspiration from tha rich give to tha poor - jus like robin hood/
aint no emcee gone burst ma bubble,to see ma level you gone need tha teliscope named hubble/
shit always talkin bout maself,damn right aint nobody else gonna they determined to leave me on tha shelf/
i aint signed,record execs blind,jus like when dinosaur fossils were discovered westy a historic find/
jus like tha reptiles were i'm on top of tha food chain,leavin listeners with an unremovable stain in tha brain/
this shit here is jus a lil sample,leavin emcees flattened after a verse they like fresh cut grass - good to trample/

Feedback greatly appreciated.

uppin!!!

Uppin!!!

This was a decent drop... had a hard time following the flow in some spots... it could've been a lot better. In some places it seems like you just put random words together that rhyme...i.e.

me and yung gee swoop are on tha mic,guarenteed to get u unbalanced even fallin of a trike/

No offense, but that line is wack... most of the verses were nice, but shit like that messes it up...

Yo keystyle dawg,thats wot that shit about,jus gettin it down as fast as possible to improve,and u don't see tha connection with unbalanced and a trike seein as a trike should be well balanceds as it has three wheels for extra balance,and i was sayin we could even unbalance u on that,yo u should have seen that,but yo ur opinion is good to see,even if u aren't thinkin bout what ur sayin.

I see... the way it was worded had me thinkin' something else all together... don't worry, I was thinkin' about what I said... Just look at it this way...

"when seen through the eyes of another, they will never see the same story."

Know what I mean? Still, like I said before, nice drop... Peace...

Cool no probs dawg,i know wot ur sayin.

this was a drop, it started off a lil bad at first but then it progresses as it moves on. The Middle was your strongest. For a keystyle it was a hot piece and it flowed with the beat in my head..Good Drop man.ONE

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