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i wrote this for another site.. the Topic was "Broken Home"
the catholic religion is called "The Church of God" Churches are "the house of god" Corruption and greed, centuries of abuse of power, Why should I devote my time? even if its just 3 hours. leaves a taste thats sour,exclude people because of their beliefs, mutate & kill millions who dont think like you,Catholicism is a horrible disease Salvation? please. claim the path of righteousness but act evil build castles, even cities, all with the money from the people digging a deep hole, damning millions to hell with false tales, you got your $, best selling authors, the Bible surpasses all books in sales lead them down false trails, i think that even you start to believe your lies supposed to be brothers and sisters, but you preach war.....why? so that once again you can rule the world? control the thoughts of every boy and girl? i refuse to follow your signs, for they lead to eternal damnation, anyone who wasnt with you got a fate worse than death: ostracization i love this nation despite its flaws and for peace i still have hope, i dont follow the Devil, so youll never see me behind the Pope give me some good feedback please. im trying to elevate.. |
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deep message...
nicely put, Catholicisim has become a little corrupt and i believe we can solve are problems without war... overall I liked this piece, so keep it up.... |
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I would appreciate it If you hit my open mic up...
Its called: PAIN (HIGHER INTELLIGENCE) |
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IP: B7E7 EEE0
im there homie...thanks for the feedback
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leaves a taste thats sour,exclude people because of their beliefs,
mutate & kill millions who dont think like you,Catholicism is a horrible disease Nice drop. I like the way you used everything against them. I thought it wuz the church itself...but it iz the Catholicz... |
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nice piece. droppim theology class on our ass.
I liked the topic that ending was ill 3.4/5.0 |
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