*if u have the bubba sparxx 'deliverance' beat....play it to this.....
i'm gonna key this one off back*



....yo....yo.......its real.......all these things we go thru.........many
have a hard time finding the words......but let me put it down.....
.....yo......yo..........come on come on.......uh......uh..............yo



in ur life u go thru changes but don't let the past overcome the
present/no chance to live in harmony when past misery is very
much present/it isn't what it seems but what it seems can corrupt
ur mind/focused on ur wounds leads to depression in only a
matter of time/so u once smoked pine............so u once commited
battery/the Lord forgives u, forgive urself and recharge ur mental
battery/feelin weighed down by ur salary, feelin weighed down
by emotions of a broken heart/lettin those emotions rule u
systematically starts acts of fallin apart/keep ur head above
water.....move on, but its easier said than done/laying in the bed
self motivating ur head to see urself as number one/but weaknes
causes u to feel number 2, 3, 4 and to the very last/regretting the
day u beat ur girls ass....feeling more pain than cutting urself on
a window shattered and broken wit jagged glass/so what do u
do......ur minds in limbo......so confused even ur sleep is taken/
listen to some Bonecrusher but uf find ur emotions and mental is
still battered and shaken/seems as though death is unpatiently
waiten......cuz death looks like the only way of escape/but wit
ur seeds planted u knowin in this world how can they participate/
u sit and anticipate just a drop of water to soothe ur soul from
dwelling in hell/carry on thru the day portayin that all is well/but
u hate the next day knowin it brings and carries the same damn
routine/wondering when life started going bad.....adulthood?.....
toddler?.....or was it the years of a teen?/forget the meaning of
life, u wanna know when is the pain gonna subside/cuz happiness
joy, and love are feelings for u that stays being denied/no person
to confide in cuz too many already took ur trust/now u only find
temporary pleasure in fulfilling ur desires of lust/only time not
confused is when u know ur going thru hurt/lets end it.....i see a
truck coming and step in front.....*SKUUUUUUURRRTTTTTTT*.....


pause


beat drops again


nah.......can't do it....never will.....cuz i wasn't the type that was
born weak/if this is life then this is life so be it i'll stay on my feet/
not a victim of defeat, matter of fact i'm no longer a victim/cuz i
accepted this is my life and let go of foolish wishin/so....'baby
don't cry got to keep ur head up, even though the road is hard
never give up'................1

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Blessed wit Skillz

Nice Drop... For A Keystyle.. Word Up Nucca!

dat was straight

uppin this bullshit...........................

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Blessed wit Skillz

this was a nice piece 13...you used some nice vocab and i felt it gave it better detail into wotyour tryna pervade...this was real nice enjoyable read...i guess this was te sort of toic that jus flowed straight out because i felt it from the heart...fo' real...1...

nice piece homie, very nice vocab, shit was hot

itll sound tight if it was on audio

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appreciate the comments yo.......no doubt........

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Blessed wit Skillz

yup!!! mos definetlee feeln this shit...and it would fit nice as fucc 4 tha beat u chose...ure shit was hittn dogg....im likn this....i HELLA wanna hear this peice in audio ya feel? but yea shit flowed good, and everything....SAV'D OUT!!

~CIN~

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J.Cin aka JJdaBABAY
THE A-TEAM/MONEY HUNGRY
www.soundclick.com/JCin6one9


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