Aight this is a lil collabo from me n ma boi alien...lol....here it goes...



(Ruthless)
WithOut LOve this world is twisted, any message I missed it...
Clinched more pain inside of my soul than my fist-did...
Chynagurl I kissed it, good bye, let out a brief sigh and kept strugglin'...
All the RB haters kept mumblin', while emotions are tumblin'...
My Warlord spirit is crumblin', but I gotta stay strong...
Keep carryin' on, but my stamina's gone...
Like I've got nothin left...
Feel close to death, as if they took my last breath... My sholders are supportin' so much...
Reach out to my warlord people that im tryin to touch...
My thesis, my hunch, I'm packin more punch...

(ChynaDoll)
Alot of things been going on:
Im just discovering life is real:
More than ever I sit and Mourn:
Depressed and worthless I began to feel:
Seems people were put here to make my life hell:
Seems no one understands what im going through:
And they wonder why I stay locked in a shell:
Yes they wonder; They assume, They dont ask so they have no clue:
Then this shit called love came along:
Love? In my opinion its just disguised hate:
got me actin crazy and I dont know if I can take it for long:
But they say hold on cause it's your fate:
All the things I been going through seems like an illusion:
Well I wish it was then I wouldnt have to go through so much Confusion:
It seems like everyone I love is takin away:
Or is it that I take love for granted so the price i must pay:
For I cant take anymore and I need him to come and take me away from this awful love song:

(Chorus)
Love to learn from_
Eye2Eye lack a lie, explain ur why
Maintain u fly; shame or shy
Love to learn from_
HandinHand; plottin plan be YO'mAn
B'ma'wOmAn!

(Ruthless)
And pain's been recycled, I'm like a 13 disciple...
Spitin' scripture out of a holly book, it's like sin is my rival...
Though it seems we get along, and sit side by side...
Yo! I try so hard, perfection I strive...
For, I long to be on tour, with PEACE so my peoples could scream encore...
But I'm sore and don't know how to finish...
The lyrics are in-it, watchin my foes deminish, I'm tryin to win-it...
But it seems like its over, write lyrics like HOVA but with more insight...
When I write emotion ignites and sets flight to lead toward the light...
So much strife thru the night, you know, that I might..............

(ChynaDoll)
Soul Mates Never dissipate and they never part:
The spiritual bond that connects the two is connected heart to heart: it matters not -dead or alive: The bond cannot be broken: and you feel the pain of the other:Even when words are not being spoken: You can deny in your head:But never in your heart: What God puts together: No man can tear apart:Soul Mates never dissipate and they never part: The spiritual bond that connects the two is connected heart to heart: So you may haveanother lover:ya girl, ya man, maybe ya wife: But eternal bond of your soulmate: Gels the existence of your life: Flesh will perish: we all must die:But the spirit of your soul mate continues: because your soul mate lives within you: For man was not meant to live alone:So your soul mate you must embrace:To ignore the existence of your soulmate:is to deny your very own fate:soul mates never dissipate and they never part: the spiritual bond that connect the two is connected heart to heart:

(Chorus)
Love to learn from_
Eye2Eye lack a lie, explain ur why
Maintain u fly; shame or shy
Love to learn from_
HandinHand; plottin plan be YO'mAn
B'ma'wOmAn!



LET US KNO WUZ GOOD...HOLLA!!

Chynadoll Shined On This Piece More Than Anything
And I Related To Her Verses Somewhat

The Chorus Made Me Think Of Some Ja Rule
And Ashanti Shit Honestly It Coulda Been Better
Than What You Had Presented For Us ~B.R.E Presents~

Ruthless You Could Have came Longer And Probaly
Iller In Your Verses But Overall You Were Alright

Ill Or Related To the Most......

"Yes they wonder; They assume, They dont ask so they have no clue"

"I'm like a 13 disciple...
Spitin' scripture out of a holly book, it's like sin is my rival"

"The spiritual bond that connects the two is connected heart to heart: it matters not -dead or alive: The bond cannot be broken: and you feel the pain of the other"

Wish I Could Believe That Still..This Was
An Alright Piece I Just Disliked The Chorus

~Content~

Lol She aint in B.R.E , Anyways nice deep piece right here , Ruthless had some sick Lines , ChynaDoll cameout blazing as always , But ya all could have done better on the chorus , That was da only down point in this collab...Overall ya all get a 8/10

Thanks For Waiting For My Part Ruth..

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the chorus was made like 2 min b 4 i posted cuz he said we need a chorus so we jus threw it in dea.... sorry sureal- next time dawg.....HOLLA

LOOOOOOOOOOL SUreal u took too Long but am coming wit another open Mic wit Pair dyce and i want you be apart of it

is called Mind Philosophy....or somethin in that way

Contact me on AIM


and CHyna,,,,,Nice job damn we did this fast.............lol


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Rhyming/Flow
Off The Chain! This Shit Was Blazin. Both Of Your 2nd Verse's However, Were Superior To Your First!
"And pain's been recycled, I'm like a 13 disciple...
Spitin' scripture out of a holly book, it's like sin is my rival..." - LOved That Bar Ruth!

Chyna, Didn't Understand The Way Structured Your 2nd verse but It Was Hott. Flowed Smooth All The Way Through! You Had The Sorta Poetry Styke To It... Damn...9/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Really Shone Through. It Resembled The Emotion Involved in This piece! Mad Wordplay On Both Parts...8/10

Concept/Topic
Never Once Walked Away From The Topic, You Thought Throughly About Each Bar Cos It Was Bangin'! People At First Glance Might See This As Another Love Song, But If Your REALLY Read It Then You'll Find That It's Original - You Made It Your Own...9/10

Overall
Fuckin Straight A Piece! As I said In The Last Thread - Not Many Songs LIke This Goin' About Anymore! Great Read, Only Downfall - The Hook. Sounded A Bit Too MUch Murder INc'y, But as Your Said - 2 mins Before Posting It So We Can Excuse You...9/10

Word!

lol thanks yall... but shit i like Murder Inc...... Ja ma husband ,,, n e way keep yall opinons comin.... and alien yes.. we did this VERY fast ... Alien: are u done yet.. Me: no ..Alien: how bout now?....LMMAFO

THIS RIGHT HERE IS WHAT I STRIVE FOR WHY I DO THIS!!!!!
THE SUBJECT WAS ILL AS HELL THEN STAYING ON IT LIKE YOU DID BROGHT ITS FULL COMPACITY AND WRATH OUT.EVERY ASPECT WAS THERE AND UTILIZED AN IMPECABLE PEACE HERE>10/10
PEEP MY NEW ISH HIGH ANNOINTED

word AND THE REST THANX FOR THE SHOWIN SOME LOVE

AND YEA kEN.....HAD DIFFICULTIES STAYIN ON THE TOPIC BUT OL BOY RUTH HAD HER IN CHECK...LOL


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thanks for the shout ruth...lol.......anywayz...yo....this was a nice
piece.....chyna...u came dope....thats real talk....so did u ruth....
i can't hate on this....i must give props to where props is due.....
nice vocab....flow.....and just to let yall know....love is just another
word easily abused......1

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