Iight spit your verse mine will be up in a second just gotta get it from tha other thread.
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{Kracks Knuckles As He Gets Ready To Shock This Wanna Be Vet}

I'm "Jack-The-Ripper” of rap, all my thoughts are “Homicidal”//
With a single vital-recital I rip the “First Page” Of The “Book” and Snatch your “Title”//
You “Eat Dick” for a vote, so by the end of my spit you'll “Choke”//
Take a "Note" cuz you'll need to be "Reminded" repeatedly that your a joke//
I deliver “Pane” threw the net, like I E-Mail “Glass”//
Stepping to me is like “Sitting On Eggs” I’m Leaving “Shells-in-ya-ass”//
You "Pre-Write" so much that you become "Behind Times"...goodluck//
I put my "Dick On Tha Screen" so you could say your "Lines Are Fucked"//
I’ll drench you in “Blood"...call me a 'Math Matician' tha way i "Divided You With Nines"//
I “Broke” your “Rap Career”, so when you throw your hands up it looks like your throwing wrong “Gang-Signs// Rap Career=Fingers/Typing

Iight son quit stuntin, hurry up nigga^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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aight checkin in just seen dis gotta go to my niggas to pick somethin up den im comin back to spit ASAP........................................

WHERE THA BROOKLYN AT

Dis man is like "dicks" after "spittin" he aint *"comin"* hard
Verbally how can ur "punchlines" affect me if they coming as soft as "Pop Tarts"

Your lyrics are more "bitten" than "Minime" but im tha one who got the "Powers"
Since you claimin you were on da site before me looks like ur lyrics r goin "back" in time "hour by hour"

Raps similar to a "dryed out soap" he cant clean up his "bad act"
Atomic aint droppin in my zone comin at me like a model not *"phat"*

Kid need to "watch" my last battles cuz it seems his ass aint on the "block" hes the one gettin "busted" (watch battles like blockbuster haha)
Have ya blood spread like "Martha Stewart" pattern stains like musted (mustard)

He couldnt "shake me" not even if he was offically classified as a "earthquake"
Like "Britney Spears" tities he wasnt on tha site before me hes a "fake"

*-Metaphors can go both ways they good ones 2 lol

i like envy ny on this one betta flow and tha punches kept me laughin not a bad battle tho yo could u peep my battle against xtreme flow thanx

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u prolly dont have a job and u sleep at da dock
put u outa ur misery so u can hang wit tupac
Victims
Onyx_Storms(ko) 86barsfromva(ko) XtremeFlow(5-1) crazypatient(ko) crazypatient gorillaquantity(ko) pro.fess.in.all(5-1)

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Nice battle

Punches: Tie
Wordplay:Envy
Metaphors: Envy
Vocab:None
Creativity: Tie

Vote: Envy
His verse was overall better...

Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67128

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This is how I saw it
Punches: EnVy Ny >> Atomic Bars
Wordplay: EnVy Ny <= Atomic Bars
Flow: EnVy Ny > Atomic Bars

vote: EnVy Ny

hit my battle up with an honest vote
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yo I think envy ny took this one
his punches and flow was slightly better
that was a good verse atomic, u had some nice punches, u look like u'll be a good netcee on this site
this battle could've went either way but envy had a slight edge
vote=envy ny


hit this up with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67219