i close my eyes, you appear into my head, my thought become still
the memories could make the devil smile, being with u is a thrill
i escape into my own world, where its just me, my girl, no distractions
layin in the grass, look into eachothers eyes, always laughin
always smilin, this world is nothing but a sweet serenity to reality
there are no laws here, no police, no rules, not even that of gravity
if we wanted to we could float away with eachother forever, no worries
we have untill the end of time, no rushes, no hurries
nothing to pull us apart, nothing to keep us from touchin eachothers heart
smiles of gold, hugs of love, and just imagine, this is only the start
i hold you in my arms, i feel your heart beat against my chest, im blessed
i could never have guessed that this could happen, its not even a test
this is our world, nobody else, just you and me, wherever we want to be
anything you want, anything you need, anything to make you happy
and all i need is you, seeing your face is security enough
everything is perfect, grass beuatifully green, roses of red, and clouds look like fluff
nothing can come between us now, we are together, smiling in love
when its daytime its only the big blue sky, when its nightime, we see heaven above...

but then i open my eyes, im pulled back from this dream, where did it all go?

now im sitting in my room, missing my baby so much
just wishing this world could come true, wishing that we had a moment to touch
wishing i could stair into your eyes again, wishing i could see those skies again
i know we arent in that world anymore, but could this really be the end?
knowing we arent together, just rips me up inside, i wanna die
i wanna cry, i want to lock myself out of this reality, go back to where we lied
where we could always be together, what happened to those flowers?
what happened to the perfect sunset, the perfect place, all of those hours
that we spent together, just me, you, and the world that we created
the world in which we could do anything, our love NEVER faded
we are torn back into this reality, we are seperated and cant be with eachother
society forces us to move apart, forces us to move onto another
but i wont, because i know somewhere out there, this world exists
somewhere out there, somewhere, me and you will feel the bliss
somewhere i will stare into your eyes, forget all my problems and troubles
and in this place, whenever we get there, true love will begin to bubble....

eyo man smooth lines - i felt you on this one

keep speakin from da heart

holla

thanks dawg...appreciate it..

this is prolly my favorite peice....so i appreciate ya knowledge...

still uppin for some feedback...

be-eazy

wow ... this is tight...
really I enjoyed every line
keep on doing this... it's one of the best I've read bout 'love' lately

peace

The way you rounded it off (last line) was kind of crap. No, it was crap. Though i dug what you were trying to say with it.


but the overall piece was very good. No wait, everything before that last line was very good. If not better than very good.

It could be that cos i felt it real deep, and it spoke a lot home truths on the subject. A whole lot.

Either way, i personally liked it a lot.

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