This was just written yesterday...I wrote in a pretty fast time...and I think its good...tell me what you think...Thanks


"From Within"

From within, I can feel the emotional pain
From within, I feel completely insane
The darkness of life follows me around
Constantly depressing me, making me feel down
My short temper only makes life worst
Like I'm under some sort of Curse
People say my eyes can stare right through you
That they are always Solid, and a cold dark blue
I'm always silent, only talking when I must
But there aren't many people that I trust
I may not say much, but I say what’s on my mind
Don't hold my tongue, don’t leave it behind
I will always finish what I start
I take everything lightly, and I keep my heart
I don't pass it around like a toy
Don't let it get played by some reckless boy
I keep to myself, maintaining a low profile
I'm the type that won't give you a fair Trial
I'll do you the justice on my own
Leave you to die in the dark, All alone
I'll never look back at your decaying face
Just keep walking, But don't pick up pace
From within, I will never feel wrong
From within, I’ll never be were I belong

tight shit. i havent been on in a while ive been busy but i feel this fa real, i just seperated with my girl for cheatin,i hate that shit fa real,i feel ya pain,keep writin tight shit baby girl

Hey..sorry to hear about your girl...that shit hurts...But thanks for the response...luv

peAce

nice drop could really feel ur pain really gets the reader into it