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10-15 lines you spit first

peace

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The Creation

tell me when u done wit yo verse, cause i don't wanna post my shit and then u write about it...........so just let me know when u done

fuck it i finna drop anyways.............don't use my shit tho

Yo.........I finna be like Hannibal Lector and cut off yo back//
don't get mad at Collector....cause u told me to cut u some slack//
yo rappin is whack, and ain't u supposed to be tha remix//
u way out of ur league u messin wit a cat that froze the pheonix//
i was born to flow, so you can just call me the tyrant//
heres some advice, u can flow "fresher" if u had some "trident"//
you not a rapper, u better off just being a fan//
cause the way things are going, you are really startin to remind me of stan//
i don't know why u challenged my in the first place, i'm an unstoppable might//
you need to get rid of yo name, cause the only thing u remixin is tha next tropical sprite//

hey dogg i'm done wit my verse but i just realized i have 18 lines and i said 10-15 is that ok? it's only 3 lines over

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The Creation

forget it.........here's my verse it is 14 lines.............................i said 10-15..........peace out whodi good luck.......my

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The Creation

...:::WORKIN' INTO THA MERK:::....
Paralyzed by these rhymes this is tha time where you shutdown like a computer that's mine// (computers always shut down on me)
Seized by this clown who thinks he is tight till i light it up and now he just wears tights//
Hypnotized and Amazed that this lyrical blazing is directed towards you//
You stepped to a vet-at-heart who was set-at-start and ready to merk and coming new//
I'ma shove this so hard all up in your face till u feel like this shit is the end of your fate//
Then i just drop another line wit u in fear you can't take all this shit, too much hate//
Laid back watchin' u die spittin' lyrical peroxide in your eye to relieve your pain//
Relieve you of seein' what's lain out in front of you flow crazy and complex crazed//
I'm a merking addict when i spit you'll throw a fit sayin' but it says flyweight...that don't mean shit//
Damn i'm about to break this lyrical whip cuz don't u know i'm a freestyle king like Lil' Flip//

***GETTING SERIOUS NOW***

My freestyle insanity could put an end to humanity this shit's sweeter than candy//
A dictionary might be handy this isn't even "fair" like tha magazine "vanity"// (Vanity Fair is a magazine)
You claim to be manly but u can't-be when you nuttin' but a man wannabe, pansy//
No one wants to hear ur voice cuz it's more uncanny than tha voice of fran "Tha Nanny"//

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

damn pretty weak battle
but Remix got this
ya'll need ta elevate tho
no hate tho
juss givin advice

vote-remix

This battle was one sided

Punches: Tha Remix
Wordplay: Tha Remix
Metaphors: Tha Remix
Personals: Neither

Collector u gotta elevate Dawg

Vote: Tha Remix

Return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...26&pagenumber=3

thanks for tha votes everyone.......keep voting!.......................up 1.....................................

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Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

thanx for votin tho................can we get more votes up in here.............good verse remix............uppin

some people need to vote on this shit, i would if i could...uppin'...
anyone with 100 posts should be votin their asses off, people view the posts but never wanna vote, come on now

[QUOTE]Originally posted by Bash
[B]This battle was one sided

Punches: Tha Remix
Wordplay: Tha Remix
Metaphors: Tha Remix
Personals: Neither

Vote: Tha Remix

thats what it is vote-remix

drop an honest hit on this now

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=67213

ok i will..........up 2................................................. ........................................

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

thats wat i'm sayin...........vote ya'll