Alot of cats have been hating on me these dayz
Don't know why
Don't know when it's gonna stop
Don't know how it started
But I got one thing too tell ya all
Keep Hating on Me..Yeah
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Beat- Hate Me now (Nas)



Bx_Renegade (Chorus):
Nigga's keep on hatin me
Truth is, there's no way of stoppin me
Cuz I'll feed of your hate
To defeat me, there ain't no way
So I got advice for you please continue with the Hate
(2x)

[Verse 1: Bash]
Keep Hating on me"/
I'll make ya all hate even much with the Emcees that I murder , The Rhymes~That~I~Deliver"/
Make ya all Madder when i Cop~A~Squatter , Splatter ur Brains when I mantain too Spit Flames to Terminate ur Frame"/
Ya all Haters verse couldn't be TOXIC even if it was written with CARCENOGENIC ARSENIC"/
Now watch me pull out another Hater out of an Arsonist"/
The Hate Density gives me more intensity too murder ya all haters orally/
Metaphorically Spit Bulletz too give ya all a Longer Rest than u had Expected"/
I’ll Melt u bitches till ya all are DIMINISHED and defined existensial"/
I've been rapping for 2 plus years but I'm still struggling on c-a for voting credentials"/
Punchlines-&-flow combine-&-grow in time-to-show the Haters how we define-the-lyrical-code/
of rhymes-to-blow-minds-&-pull each and every vertabret from you haters chest & place ya spines-in-bowls/
show ya'all who designed-the-whole structure of rhymes-to-fold minds & play haters ribs like Xylaphones"/ Keep hating muh fuckaz

Bx_Renegade (Chorus):
Nigga's keep on hatin me
Truth is, there's no way of stoppin me
Cuz I'll feed of your hate
To defeat me, there ain't no way
So I got advice for you please continue with the Hate
(2x)

[Verse 2: Bash]
Don't hate me , Hate the Enemies That I beat and live their faces Mangled and let dem dangle till their body parts get disentagled"/
Bash and The B.R.E Generals has More strips then bengals"/
Covered at every angle to hang and Strangle haters Tangle"/
this Collab is straight Bliss... You bitches think that u can top this/
If you insist on tryin to be actin pissed when you're lackin a diss , My verses make ya all haters wish that you never exist"/
Battlin us is suicide like ya slicing your own wrist, I'm standin on a dead corpse pumpin my fist..this is exactly how I plan it"/
Yall cant stand it, talkin shit will get an Hater face slammed so hard into the pavement that ur Veterbrate will crack into the Granite
Whos the man damnit...question I ask Haters when I'm grippin their neck like a flask..gettin my place back when I crack ya face mask"/
I'll have ya mind shakin..Murdering Kids like I was from catholic demonination I'll break a hater's nation wit a simple voice influxation/
No hesistation..on and ending a life before creation"/
Keep hating..

Bx_Renegade (Chorus):
Nigga's keep on hatin me
Truth is, there's no way of stoppin me
Cuz I'll feed of your hate
To defeat me, there ain't no way
So I got advice for you please continue with the Hate
(2x)

Bx_Renegade: Keep Hating on Us



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This is the real piece right here..upping

You Really Went All Out Posting The Whole Song

Kind Of Hard To Read Along While Trying To Think Of That
Instrumental

O Well

Dope Shit Dude...Love To Hear You Behind The Mic

You Came Nice...Good Choice Of Words - Nice Bar Structure

Some Cats Don't Like To Drag Out Their Barz...I Think It Helps To
Add More Niceness

I Really Couldn't Find Any Wrong With These 2 Verses

~1~

yeh pretty good ....
decent vocab and a solid verse...flow was a bit too hard to follow...but i agree with MB^ that longer bars 'add to the niceness'
only thing that was wierd was...

'I'm standin on dead corpse pumpin my fist'
^kind of sounded like u were fisting them or sum shit...lol

or even beating off......

Yeh This Was A Good Piece...I Felt This The Whole Way..Nice Drop Man

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This is a dope sig.

uppping

Nice Drop Bash Homie.. Very Nice Keep It Up Dawg.. Do Audio Man You Seem Like Ya Would Be Hot Behind A Mic..
Peace.

Thanks Man , I might put this in Audio

bash dis was iight, but WTF u bring shit on yaself ya fuckin murkin all day in PM's bitch u a fuckin stalker n should be banned for it u fool,,,,,,,, n wait for da come back somin to do wid battle scores damn what a fuckin herb,,, shame 2 cus ya can spit iight when ya whant to,,, but fuck me ya got a attitude problem ya fuckin gump, get the fuck outta here

hmmm, the multis were there i noticed a couple of nice punches/ images, but can you actually relate you what you're writing? i mean this topic is played, played, played to death and the hook was basic as fuck. i cant understand why you put another member of your "net crew" as writing that or why you put the name of a beat at the top of a text piece. if its a track its a track, then make it an audio.

and oh putting B.R.E. presents in the title of every text piece you drop, it looks dumb. and try some originality with the subject matter instead of trying to be an internet gangsta.