Like dope fiend syringes slugs seap-through-your-skin-dead men float as the fish teach-you-to-swim..ll
Cats is insane with hearts saturated-in-flames-blastin heat through brains evaporating-ya-waves..ll
Niggaz run bullets follow and hollow-they-heads-for felacio of steal niggaz swallow-the-lead..ll
Thought it was fame but met death instead-let the soil be your home you're forever in-bed..ll
Finishes his nemises and even the witnesses-lives end abrupt, punctuation to sentences..ll
smoke stems as fire of life diminishes-disappearing acts as souls vacate the premises..ll
Trigger fingers on glockz twitchin outta control-disconnecting spirits from their bodily-hold..ll
souls gotta~get~sold to the Devil, prices-are-cheap-bodies gotta~get~cold, forever nightly-they-sleep..ll
Heavily you breathe, heartbeats increase-receive peace when the piece leave you deceased..ll
Note this 40 shots will leave ya physique distorted-introduction to death aquaint yourself with rigormortis..ll
Never mention the names of killas that's a ghetto taboo-Homicidal artists equiping guns for tatoos..ll
Death gripped by lassos, last route from cash-though-causing dick sized bullets to rip through assholes..ll
Cats whos world is rap quit-it-and-fail-on track spit-it-to-sell for their souls to purchase a ticket-to-hell..ll
-Uno

Wowie Jeffy.. Lil Bro.. Hommie LoL

Your Really Good At This! You Put Alot Of Emotion And Work In Your Verses And Its Sad To See That The Topic Is Always Depressing... I Wish My Grammar Was That Well If I Was Your Age
My Favourite Part Would Most Likely Be:

Never mention the names of killas that's a ghetto taboo-Homicidal artists equiping guns for tatoos..ll
^ Ha Ha Thats The Funniest Part

P.S Thank You For The Feedback On My Open Mic!

EMCEE DIMEZ aka Lady D

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Thank you,Kase Lover!!!^.No problem ma i'm always here to reply to open mics as long as you return the favor.My grammer sucked in my view but w.e.!floating!

Grrr.. Plz
I Almost 4got About Kase Till Now

THANX ALOT!

I Never Loved That Boy But He Was A Good Friend Though!

Im Inlove With 13th DUhh

Well Anyways

DONT SLEEEEEEPP PEEps

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P.S NEVER EVER EVER!!!!! CALL ME KASE LOVER IN PUBLIC AGAIN! LoL

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^Ok will you stop freeposting you sexy person?Its all love ma you know that i'm just a underated whiteboy
-Uno

that was a good piece, i liked the wordplay and the way you brought your punches and descriptions, and good vocab, tight shit, an thanks for the reply in my open mic..peace

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

^No problem
~floating

Nice Jeff.... As Always
I Agree They Always Deep, But Effective... Thats Tha Skill Ya Have
You Had Some Nice Multies And Flow In Thurr Too
Nice Shyt, Keep It Up

~~Wun

I love you sammy I love you
~float

ya that shit was tight, you mos def got some writin skillz. i like the "souls vacate the premises" part.

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let's get this shit straight, i'm here to eliminate- them squadz wit feminine traits, there's no escape!

Damn. I ain't seen flows like that in a minute, all ya shit flows and the descriptiveness used in the words was hot. Keep doin ya thing.

HOLLA AT DA KID

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861

Thanks !float!

yo som fuken tight shit in it dawg aiight i liked ur wordplay and rhyme scheme