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Old 07-23-03, 11:39 AM   #1
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A picture framed on the wall but where am I
Millions of people pass but I cannot shine
Tears fall but there are is no explanation
I want to move foward but move with hesitation
Masked man to the very last essence
I push you away but then i want your presence
Should be happy but im just another lost soul
Is it now or the past that is on me taking its toll
I'd lift my head but its so dug into the ground
Everything passes but i cannot make one sound
White rooms thats all I see how can this be
When I should need nothing and have everything
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Old 07-23-03, 11:48 AM   #2
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Short But Always Nice As Usual
Blusey Nothing Stood Out But Nothing
Was Wrong With It Either...Be Nice And Reply
Back In This Lifetime I Might Die Tomorrow
Or Something...Hope Your Taking Care Of Yourself

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Old 07-23-03, 08:31 PM   #3
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lol...thanx kid...much love goes towards you
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Old 07-23-03, 08:45 PM   #4
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Heh. FOr some reason i caught Content's reply. And it made me grin like a jackal...

I don't usually do this, but i agree with him (not the agreeing part, but making that part of my reply to someone elses piece). A good, solid piece that oozes with the Trinity trademark (well kind of..).


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Old 07-23-03, 09:35 PM   #5
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i dont care anymore....i'm gone from everything right now
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Old 07-23-03, 09:39 PM   #6
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^^^No, i wasn't talking about that part as such. More so the part about nothing standing out, yet nothing being wrong with it. A solid piece.
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Old 07-23-03, 09:53 PM   #7
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Yo Lady Trinity am feeling that right there, thats is tight babe, im liking it ALOT, i'm new to this and this is th second piece i have read and i love it well done good job look forward to reading more of your "stuff".

Peace Out!
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Old 07-23-03, 09:58 PM   #8
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naw, yo poem was tite! aint no huge things that stood out caz it was all good , keep it real!
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