yeah , let me burn while i can dawg//
put niggz to sleep when i start to drop tha sand fal//
thought that i waz done well now i'm back fa more//
welcome to my playhouse dawg mathfuk tha tour//
wather i'm freestylin or keystylin playa i get into a zone//
so , call me capital C dash capital B o-n-e 'BONE'//
readin bout these catz man don sparked fire//
so , don't fuk around tha flamez cuz they gettin higher//
my desire is to do this till my life ex-pires//
my infurno gettin hotta so step on in//
mix ya body partz up and have ya up in blend//
i hope ya face is twisted up cuz style taste kinda tang//
worst than when good meets evil like yin verses yang//
ya feel wha i'm sayin dawg//
here now ta make ya dam world in spin//
and put tha bitch on repeat so it can do it again//
doin this shit while i'm fallin from tha sky but i'm tryin ta fly//
i'm tryin to ex-plore my options and reach me a new high//
like yoko zono wit small drawz on this shit got be tight//
cuz when ya think i won't fuk i just might//
cuz my hunger is so great fa this i just gotta take a bite//
tha way i did this shit here gotta leave ya brain toasted//
so i'ma end this right here and let my flow get posted//

!!!!!!!!!HOLLA!!!!!!!!!

UPPIN

Iight this was an overall wack piece, but some lines do show skillz. You really do need to elevate and practice more. Honestly if you stay on this site and with in maybe a month you'll be 3 times as better. But i guess this was an ok open mic for a beginer.
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ah fuck what he said it was phat fa just fuckin around.

thankz fa tha feedback uppin

it wasn't fucking that great but it had its moments dawg, i really liked that yoko ono line wanna collabo?