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Old 07-02-03, 11:06 AM   #1
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This is more my style.. the flow is on, if you think not, clean ya ears.. and theres a new soundcard in my producers comp so we got 24bit recording.. unfortunatly soundclick reduced the bit rate from 192 to 128 .. so it may be a little not so good.. and this isnt a final mix..


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Old 07-02-03, 11:18 AM   #2
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Old 07-02-03, 02:12 PM   #3
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Your Flow Falls Off At Times , Content Is Alright . . . Quality Is Dope, I`m Not Feelin The Beat Really .. Delivery Was Nice ,


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Old 07-03-03, 01:22 AM   #4
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the flow is on point.. but if thats ur opinion whatever..

thanks.. uppin
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Old 07-03-03, 03:49 AM   #5
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i member you...member you made beats....u made dis one? ill drum loop

lyrics is aight but im feelin ya voice the most, sorta grimey in a way

ya kno how to master your vocals well...if u make beats like dis on the reg holla at me for a purchase lol
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Old 07-03-03, 11:59 AM   #6
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this beat was fucking dope..

you've gotten a lot of better.. i remember when u used to battle that lil homo DoubleG..LMAO you were damn whack..

flows,deliverys nice, lyrics is coo.. you dont slur n shit like u used too..

overrall pretty nice..
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Old 07-04-03, 01:06 AM   #7
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yea ive worked on the slurr... haha.. and better sound cards can help too.. Double G is my brother.. but yeah i was whack..

ahah.. i didnt really make beats.. i have made a few and make a few.. but im no producer. .and this beat isnt mine.. its from a Funk Master Flex mix tape.. lol.. but im thinking off making a simular beat to place underneath after im done recording this song.. and then have it as my own..
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Old 07-06-03, 01:44 AM   #8
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Old 07-08-03, 01:47 PM   #9
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Old 07-08-03, 02:04 PM   #10
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HONESTLY.....


i aint like it at all......beat wasn't all that good, but had a good drum pattern....wasn't really feeling ur flow....and lyrics were just iight, nuttin special....delivery was ok.....outta ten i give this a 4.....
my opinion...don't like it...say sumtin....OnE


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Old 07-08-03, 02:33 PM   #11
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beats nice........flowz dope, i like tha grimey ish,...lyrics r tight..
deliveryz nice, needs a lil work on tho.....emotion an energy on tha mice is hot............nice track.........ElevatE..

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Old 07-08-03, 03:43 PM   #12
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i member you...member you made beats....u made dis one? ill drum loop

lyrics is aight but im feelin ya voice the most, sorta grimey in a way

ya kno how to master your vocals well...if u make beats like dis on the reg holla at me for a purchase lol


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dariel has come a long way but he still gota lisp...

ahahahaahhaah hes like "who are you"

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Old 07-12-03, 01:07 AM   #13
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whatever
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Old 07-12-03, 01:51 PM   #14
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nigga...u sound madd different....i remember them wack things you did wit yah brother....ne way...lyrics are nothing to shout about....quality is good....but um your voice and the way you say things...its annoys me ....................ne way....uve gotten better....and thats all that counts ....keep elevating
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Old 08-01-03, 12:41 PM   #15
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aight.. this is old.. lol.. im gonna come out wit shit next month .. got a project in works.. but im busy finishing off my studio so i can record..
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