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07-20-03, 05:13 PM | #1 | |
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un faithfull wrote this ish last night
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when in doubt// my sinful drought// leakin pen fulls out// but in another sense// rhyme degrees to tha tenth// makin fake ones repent// tha message i sent// spittin it while gettin it, my girls bent// in that i mean twisted,,soon shell be loose enough for fistin// raise abraised metal shittin clips from my piston// double chamber// your in trouble, danger// my minds vented from tha suttle anger// i listen to u puddle slander// all about tha cuddlin u hand-her// keep in mind when she played you// time to say its through// enraged for days and i couldnt do shit// now im incaged in a daze and i stand where i sit// bein embarassed when my girl throws fits// met her parents,unlike her where-as noone in tha world knows shit// shows tha knowledge u lack// im like a scholar i use facts// i detect an investigation// tha best is waitin for those who love while tha rest just hatin// in a nation full of hate// at tha point to break// im feelin great// your fate// is opposite// your wound i doctor it// while still poppin shit// droppin tips still heated// funny how shits repeated// censors may delete it// but ill still stand and read it// this feelin i dont need it// my souls bleedin// cause yours is greedy// too fuckin needy but so are all ladies// think its fun to play me?/ take this rusty cutter and slay me// then lay me down to sleep// in this grave in waves i weep// on how your ways are cheap// this shits too deep// and your hearts too weak to see// all u know how to do is cheat so dont speak to me// your better blocked out// my memories of you im tryin to knock out// my confusions topped out// no direction and i dropped out// i wont stop now//
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07-20-03, 10:11 PM | #2 | |
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man dont be constructin ya shit like dis, u ruined an iight piece
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07-26-03, 10:44 PM | #3 | |
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when in doubt, my sinful drought, leakin pen fulls out// but in another sense, rhyme degrees to tha tenth, makin fake ones repent// tha message i sent, spittin it while gettin it, my girls bent, in that i mean twisted,,soon shell be loose enough for fistin// raise abraised metal shittin clips from my piston// double chamber,, your in trouble, danger,, my minds vented from tha suttle anger// i listen to u puddle slander,, all about tha cuddlin u hand-her// keep in mind when she played you,, time to say its through// enraged for days and i couldnt do shit,, now im incaged in a daze and i stand where i sit,, bein embarassed when my girl throws fits// met her parents,unlike her where-as noone in tha world knows shit// shows tha knowledge u lack,, im like a scholar i use facts// i detect an investigation,, tha best is waitin for those who love while tha rest just hatin// in a nation full of hate,, at tha point where i might break// im feelin great,, your fate// is opposite,, your wound i doctor it,, while still poppin shit// droppin tips still heated,, funny how shits repeated,, censors may delete it,, but ill still stand and read it,, this feelin i dont need it and my souls bleedin// cause yours is greedy,, too fuckin needy but so are most ladies,, think its fun to play me?/ take this rusty cutter and slay me// then lay me down to sleep,, in this grave in waves i weep,, on how your ways are cheap// this shits too deep,, and your hearts too weak to see,, all u know how to do is cheat i dont wanna hear you speak// your better blocked out,, my memories of you im tryin to knock out,, my confusions topped out,, no direction and i dropped out// i wont stop now.
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07-27-03, 02:41 AM | #4 | |
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Hey nevamind what Zainy said..This was a tight peace....You should construct like YOU want it to be......Hella nice multis up in there homie..Nice content as well...keep spittin..
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