post ur rules...only rule i say is make it in 24 hours....

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aye i'll make the rules then....just make sure u show....

10 lines max
no dickryde/hate/bias votes
no playin off of verses
due date is 12 midnight on July 16th....

make sure u see this homie....

peace
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fuck...lol...i forgot this shit won't let me edit....my bad...i meant to say 26th^^ for the due date...

peace
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CHeck in uppn this shit
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You in here
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Check in are you here


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Holla when ya see this
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Look at this guy...givin' me deadlines....Well, I don't have much time..but here's to your defeat..

Like I said.....
...I defeat cats with the power to delete raps you complete, Jack!
Fuck your feedback! My vocals are extra nice//////
There's no way you can be mean, sitting in the middle of my text device/////
,You'll half to resort to murder with mercury knives////
I cut the fat out ya rhymes....with a scalpel real presice 666 times///
Joka got soft vocalz, I'll strip you of any dignity////
I indignantly move with symmetry, murder you beliggerantly////
Soured at what I'm about to be seein....You don't even know the real meanin' of textual emceein'/////
Look like a retarted moron smashin open Jackolantern's with a sack of salmon drenched in my semen////
my verbal vernaculars a heat tracker/I'll snatch out your spine and then BACK slap ya/my style? nastier than public school lunches////
SMoka Joka MAKES FRIENDS with my FISTS/to try to ROLL wit the PUNCHES

don't be so confident of winning....esp. with weak verses like that....kid.....RECOGNIZE

Syn-i-kill these rhymes will leave u higher than takin ten new pills, looks like i'm gonna have to break one of the "Ten Commandments" cuz it's a "sin to kill"//
every word i send is real, u won't tell ur location cuz of the kin u feel, ur rhymes are "immune" from being "sick", bitch u ain't winnin "ill"//

my rhymes are as "cold as ice in an air conditioner" bitch i'm "sendin chills", like the "Bay of Pigs" kid i'm gonna sit back and watch u "fail this mission"//
u need 'A' pair of glasses to fix ur vision because i'm the illest New-'B' u'll ever 'C' on television (ABC), this "Kat" wouldn't "send PURR-fect" hits if he was "mailin-kittens"//

bitch u ain't prevailin this shit, i'm like a "watch repairman" the way my rhymes are like "clockwork", ur "PUNCHES ain't SHIT" unless u "SOCK TURDS"//
i'll ruin ur concerts and leave "all eyes on me" like "Pac's words", u winnin the Oscars and when i say "OSCARS" i mean u winnin a "BRATWURST"//

afraid to battle me? look up "chicken on yahoo" and this will be the first emcee on the "COCK search", ur a "portable bitch" the way "u get on Top of Laps"// (laptop)
u'll drop n collapse, pray to the "HOLY GHOST" and "PREECH" every word i say cuz my words will send ur "FATHER to rehab"//

i'll remove ur "EYES" and cut "MIDWAYS IN CAPS" the way i'm "SAWin ur KNEES in HALF", need "COREL to DRAW" ur body in chalk with my "PERFECT-WORDS"// (WordPerfect & Corel Draw)
i hurt in absurd ways, every word dispursed will kill ur lines twice as worse, i might just lurk every night behind a church cuz ur demise is murked//

peace
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P.S. Here's to your defeat.....no beef....

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yeah well mine was done in 20 minuets
not a whole day

meaning you took a whole day of writing that
i seen ya last battle kid and it was nothing like that

so = thats a straight up prewritten
if i knew your were gonna do that joka i woulda spent all day on mine too just too murder ya ass in text

look kid...u can ask any warlord...i do my shit quickly...so don't try to explain with some bullshit u don't know about...+ it's due date was in 24 hours u lame shit....that's not much time to do shit....so stop bitchin u pussy and take it like a prison inmate....

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yeah but you know you took a while with that

i seen ya last battle and it wasnt half that good

Nice shit let the peeps vote

I dont give a fuck

See when i spit first the other cat takes mad long time
to drop their shit

SO FUCK YOU AND YA PRSION INMATE LIL MAN

IF YOU WIN YEAH FOR YOU

CAUSE I GET HATED ON ALL THE TIME

whoa. newbie rushing adrenaline
sorry syn but smokajoka took thisjust read his verse, damn!!!!!!!!!!

thanx for the vote...lol.....aye check it Syn....

ur verse was posted: posted: 07-26-03 at 05:49 PM
my verse was posted: posted: 07-26-03 at 06:45 PM

no even one hour after urs kid....i couldn't have done that good in one hour....lol....only reason my verse was weak against Nebo was because i was rushed....and i have about three battles a day (no joke) so i run outta shit....just check my battle with Prolifik Prophet...another "Vet" who thought i'm a weak newbie....kid i've been around twice as long as u....i'm just new here....

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My vote goes to SmokaJoka666
better flow and punchlines

vote =SmokaJoka666 ;''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' ''''''''

aight coo...2 & 0......uppin.....this is my first up aight......keep on voting people

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