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Old 07-27-03, 05:48 PM   #1
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the verbal gods proF-E-C on the cycle of rap........

IP: CC07 EC19

our lifes are reborn, reincarnate the great of deaFt for Dem all//
unite the engergetic minds of those with xtru t-s-t-all life signs//
breathe anomolies into there mouth, free falling in style wiD0ut doubts//
give those who spit on the mic, a tiightle//
to undergo changes and embark in the poetiKal SyKill//
let them stage a FenomEna and spread there FullofC//
embed the knowledge breathe and past them down to the inf|_|ntry//
let groups of wraiths, record tapes, insert them in devices to gr0 in shape//
electro flows escape into the unconscious minds of state//
spark light and dark debates, confront D-ci-pulls to speak//
to free speak and amplify desibells outta reach//
outta reach from the SpeC-illest blac magician//
let him call upon the clouds rehabiltation//
let human societies financial needs depend on the wraiths muziK//
feed the youth images, symbolic descriptions of what: HIP HOP IS



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Old 07-27-03, 08:46 PM   #2
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will someone please post and critque this
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Old 07-27-03, 10:06 PM   #3
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This Was An Alright Peice....

Flow Def Needs To Be Worked On, I could really Follow You Too Well........
But We All Gotta Elevate, You're Just Another..........
Keep Spittin
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Old 07-27-03, 10:41 PM   #4
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Quote:
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This Was An Alright Peice....

Flow Def Needs To Be Worked On, I could really Follow You Too Well........
But We All Gotta Elevate, You're Just Another..........
Keep Spittin


he said it perfectly return the favo on my piece

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68471
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