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Old 07-27-03, 12:21 AM   #1
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Can You Stand The Pain?( 2 sides two every story)... Feat. ChynaDoll and Bash

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Aight this is a lil sumpin me n bash put together let us know wha u think..


(Bash)
Was it a pearl shower from Neptune? Lightning tempest from Zeus?
Was it a honey bath from bumblebees down in the Baton Rouge?
Whatever the case, your loveliness sticks slippery like sap and glows through your perfect frame.
Never did you exist; you disappear like words floating in the stale air,
Never were you there, even when I spoke to your reflection I failed to stare
Accurately so I could sense your absence; yet all I see now is blurry, and all I feel is rain.
My heart wants you more, then my body needs air,
Because I long to wake, and have you right there,
when im gone away from home
you pictures shows im not alone
when i see you smile
u put me in that lovin zone
the burdens i put up with from you is out of self tolerence..hopein the immense pain u have put into the stuggles of my life"/

(ChynaDoll)
Automatic its tragic a relationship that never lasted, what happened? just talkin’ to you made my day rapid// love’n and lust nothin’ but trust, when we fuss we kiss’n make up// now I’m hittin’ the dust, I guess for “me-n-u” it just wasn’t our time yet, I thought you loved me now I’m buggin’ in my mind-set(feelin’s)// I wasn’t the best woman but whatever, being there for you in any weather when times was bad I made efforts to make it better// shit but now I’m hurtin’ certain our relationship come to a closed curtain, my feelings never changed and I’m sorry I wasn’t perfect// but yo everybody makes mistakes, and when you go remember no girl can take my place// I’m one of a kind divine hard to define, read these lines I sign “ChynaDoll” no love deep has mine it was times when I thought in my mind new things to find and my style to redesign// but nah neva that steady level cats thought you was my match, nah just a stab in the back// now how I act?, never find me caught in the wrong, I’m to strong to cry so I’ll let my tears pour in the song//

(Chorus)

I used to be scared to love you now I’m back to the start, thought you cared for me but you left a crack in my heart// never again will I feel the same, “Can you stand the rain?” or “Can you stand the Pain?”

(Bash)

Yo what am I supposed to do when I look at you and see something I want//
but can't have , these feelings are bugging and they gather within to haunt//
the darkness comes in hovering over u like blankets over ur head
slowly movin closer to u as u feel the shadow descend on ur face
Never replace you wit nuthin , You was sumthin I was truly Loving"/
From the lonliness surrounding me i can't express how it feels"/
quitness giving u insecurity making u think of abdicating me and falling into the my pit"/
but the hope is removed by ur lies/
because the lies are wut brought our darkness wut brought this remarkable horrid version of life/
U're the one That I love , the one i will never place nuthin Above"/
My own Love and Caring Dove"/
Gratitude shown a night reminiscent
Blasphemous tears, dried, forgotten of their fall...
Whispers of a dead departure... and exit scene
Baby u was all that I need/

(ChynaDoll)
Everyday without you my feelings grow more intensive, but I’m gone do better now that I’m goal oriented// never again will I let love rule me, you used me but its cool see cuz I know you gotta girl and I found a new piece// boo she’ll never have the feelings you released for me, peacefully is how I see it but yall will never reach the peak we seen// and me only solely hold things I bestowed sweet, you wanted to leave me coldly you see now anything that aint me is below me// and even if you never want me back its coo I respect it, because my feelings you neglected being reckless with my feelings well check this, future blessing and lessons for me but you and your new girl she’s no contesting for me she gets rejected// and there got to be negative feelings in you from being apart, and i kno another girl cant leave a bigger mark deep in your heart// it was seen from the start, fuck it my hearts getting’ damaged, this how we have it I couldn’t do you better wit my own disadvantage// so you saw fit to leave me for another girl, while I tried to make things better you had other plans// you may listen but I’ll never reveal my feelings again, and nah I can’t “Stand The Rain” so I’m concealing the pain//

(Chorus)

I used to be scared to love you now I’m back to the start, thought you cared for me but you left a crack in my heart// never again will I feel the same, “Can you stand the rain?” or “Can you stand the Pain?”



sorry iz long.....
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Old 07-27-03, 02:37 AM   #2
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I really liked this piece....Yall go good together...Bash is soulful and emotional...And chynadoll has got that street thang in her rhymes...I can sense it in this rhyme......tight drop you two....I look forwrd to readin more like this....keep blessin
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Old 07-27-03, 06:18 AM   #3
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LOL Street Thang..emhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Good collabo i see ya'll 2 gettin along...lol
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Old 07-27-03, 01:19 PM   #4
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Good collabo i see ya'll 2 gettin along...lol




^^ LoL iz jus a biznass thang...
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Old 07-27-03, 02:45 PM   #5
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fuckin biter............. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39511

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Old 07-27-03, 03:27 PM   #6
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Holy shit.................damn bazzy do somethin bout this shit
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Old 07-27-03, 03:28 PM   #7
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Don't worry..............................I already told the admin and she'll be banned.........I.P. banned Im sure.....soon enough
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Old 07-27-03, 03:56 PM   #8
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damn thats some throwed ass shit,bitin aint cool kid you should be writin ya own shit fa real,i dont know what ta say peace .
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Old 07-27-03, 04:07 PM   #9
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And Not To mention......That Bitin was just like......woah....she just totally took that whole fuckin verse outta that kids song.......holy shit
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Old 07-27-03, 04:40 PM   #10
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Banned. .
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Old 07-27-03, 04:42 PM   #11
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^^Good Job^^

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Old 07-27-03, 04:52 PM   #12
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lmao she's banned...hahahaha , damn chynadoll , why did u had too bite

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Old 07-27-03, 04:55 PM   #13
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^^Nah not yet^^
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But the biting bitch will be soon...........lmao
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Old 07-27-03, 08:21 PM   #14
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damn aint that some shit dyme got banned well them biters will be delt wit.
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Old 07-27-03, 11:02 PM   #15
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chyna doll you wack ass bitting bitch! you probabley bit in your battles to
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