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Old 08-01-03, 06:35 AM   #1
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Old 08-01-03, 08:57 AM   #2
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sOme feedback would be nice..
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Old 08-01-03, 10:03 AM   #3
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Beat Aint Bad...Are You Canadian? Haha You Sound Like A Glorified Blunt MC haha...Na Its Perty Nice Man...Hook Is Coo...You're Delivery and Flow Is Aiight...Lyrics Are Ok...Just Yeah Well You Can Always Up Your Lyrics So Just Keep At It Uh...Elevation...Pz...
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Old 08-01-03, 03:44 PM   #4
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Yeah the track was *cute*, the delivery of your lyrics*thumbsdown*. Hip-Hop is also an expression, take your time MEMORIZE IT!!! Play with it, record it in different styles then pick which one is good. We gotta feel the flow, not feel you reading to the beat. Nice effort though, this shit ain't no cake walk dog, if your gonna rep, make sure you did it the best you can...
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Old 08-01-03, 05:01 PM   #5
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i aint really feelin this track....your flow is off beat in a few parts of the song....and you have to many pauses....the beat was iight....overall i give this a 5/10.....couldve been a better track.....




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Old 08-02-03, 12:00 AM   #6
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Aight thanx
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Old 08-02-03, 07:18 AM   #7
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