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Old 08-02-03, 06:18 PM   #1
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Yo im just exercising ma flow and cool edit pro peep and tell a nigga wa u think....free to give advise ...positive or negative dont matter..1

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Old 08-02-03, 08:10 PM   #2
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Old 08-02-03, 11:15 PM   #3
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like i said in your last track....u gotta work on ur delivery, and try to stay on point with the beat.....dont let the beat take you....you take the beat, this was ok....try to pick a more rugged beat....i think you'll do better on them, because ur flow is sort of quick, so try a faster pace beat to see if that works.....stay up my nigga.....OnE




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Old 08-03-03, 05:52 AM   #4
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appreciate it nice...thanx bra..1
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