you're on some of that "other shit". reminds me of Jedi Mind. not in the ridin dick way in the different style way. which is good cause they're easily one of my favorites. not gonna lie though, i didnt get all of it, which if you're anything like me probably just put a smile on ya face.

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lol, all the words u dont understand go to www.dictionary.com lol
yea jedi mind tricks have inspired my write not intellectually, but in a more philosical way, thanx bruv

There is vocabulary, and then there is this....don't overwhelm the reader, or listener with so many big words. Then it just comes of as you have a dictionary in your hand as you are writing it.

I didn't read this thoroughly because I don't like the "~" and "|" placed inbetween multi's and puns to indicate significance.
They are not necessary.

safe, appreciate the crituque bruv, and i didnt hold a dictionary to write this, if mc's cant understand one another, theres a fualt in the reader, cus the writer must now what he talks about, complexity should entrigue people