yo we doin up to ten bars...... no beef

same rules as always.....

don't matter who spit first....

verses due tomarrow........

first to 5 win........5 straight ko

10 bars a piece,aiight sweet...

yo 'j' wot up dawg, you lookin' ''SHOOK'',\\
you rhyme so bad, i'd win if i let u of the hook,\\
LOOK, u ain't even got haff a chance,\\
i leave u standin there, in ya J is a gay stance,\\
i cant believe u wanna dance; wit a kat like me,\\
u only offered this challenge cos u thought i'd bak out 'g'\\
Oh shook don't cry i dont really think ya gay,\\
I just no u cudnt rip me if ya had an A.K\\
after battlin' me your left butttered-up n lightly toasted,\\
FACE IT,Gon take u like 2 days fo u to rite ya rap & post it\\

yo thought it was ten lines...so i give u anotha 5 bars...

Pick up were i left off, beatin' yo ass,\\
Everybody know shook aint got class,\\
U jus fake brass, I'm the golden one,\\
Like i sed befor' u cudnt kill me wit a gun,\\
Your dun, u shud jus give up & quit,\\
I'll make it easy for u 'j'; don't cum bak wit ya spit,\\
Thats it, i've dun my bars now i jus gotta wait,\\
You'll be lucky if u can cum up wit eight,THAT great\\


GOOD LUCK...i uno if u need it, shud b easy fo a fly-weight to beat that.....n no bitin j....clean...no beef

**J Shooks VERSE BARS**

**Bringin Bhe HEAT **
~(mulites)~
See i pause to spit, in percision to hit, so i drop this kid like a bad habbit/
he prepare by writting rhymes, but freezes to many times, a choke artist at-its-best like b rabbit//

I guess i'ma "flyweight", drived-from "hate", cuz i spit words of all types/
"RENF" is weak as fuck, his head's confused an stuck, goin noware like potatos-in-tail-pipes//

winning this easy, the "GURU" can't see-me, hes put down faster then a bullet to the brain/
doesn't get a chance to retaliate, or to stipulate, he was set to hell before my shit made him insane//


**ENDIN IT**

this kids good...HAA at gettn-loses, he was already fucked by havin his name have an alias/
im spittin ice that causes u to slip-an-fall, forced to crawl, u killed but my "SHOOK" but yet im "Anonymous"//

pissin me off like a clock wit a KOO-KOO, u not a GURU, your rhymes are simple not wise/
ur rhymes fallin apart like Japenese cars, as i infect u wit S.A.R.S, your crust breakes-down u soft-in-between like pies//

off course~ your punches ALL-FLY-BY-ME/ turn your grin to a upside-down-smilie,as i mark this as a KO/
u end up battered an beat, u couldn't compete, ur chances would have been better wit a NO-SHOW//


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i didn't spit all en cuz i have longer bars........ yea no beef man. let the et MC win...............uppin for VOTES

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TITE shit...aigght i prolly lost there.....hahahahha tryna fill 100 characters erm.....aiight
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OKAY guy...This battle was KIND of wak...Hard to analyze it bar from bar cause so many fillers was used...I vote J SHOOK cause his structure and wordplay outshined in this battle.....


J SHOOK.....

J-SHOOK got this with better dissing and wordplay
hard battle to undastand
nothing really stood out in both verses
Just shooks was more directed and better use of wordplay

vote = J SHOOK


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aiight jus like i thought....guess i aint no flyweight then...hahahha no prollem tho dawg...a battle lost is an improvement gained.....or summit...thanx fo the votes...this shit can get finished soon...win or lose....no beef!

plz vote on any of my otha battles to get them done to

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sorry renf~but another 100 barz couldnt have helped u here'...beef up ur lines...use sum werd'play...vocab...complex'it up....n u be alright....

from what i see....j-shook has already dun this.....

thus....
vote j shook....

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yea i vote J- shook, the punches he used were better than the punches of the otha guy......
It was a good spit by both but j shooks verse i was feelin more

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