quick 10 linez, 5 barz
no dr
no crew
no hate
ya no da shit
u drop first
lets do dis.................

da kat said he had 2 eat (........) so imma drop first

Its time ta setile da "score", fuck up dis "man-whore", rip our ya "Vocal Chords" and Drag dem across da floor" :: Bitch dis is "hardcore", now u comin back sayin"I cant battle u cuz my "throat" is "soar""// (ripped out vocal chords and dragged dem on floor, vocal chords r in ur throat)

Quick to "dispense" this "sinner" and force his "repentance" :: Cause "biting" will leave you nowhere but facing a "banning sentence"//

Battelin, u gonna get "smacked", if u waz a "ho" and i waz a "pimp", u'd get "slapped" :: My shits hittin u hard, ya feelin "trapped", thinkin 2 ya self "i neva should've rapped", its so "overwhelming" ur losing ya "grasp", bringin it 2 ya lyk an "asthma~attack"//

Lyrically kill you off da "boards", not "banned", jus "unlisted" :: Your rhymes from the "past", i rap in "present" kinda like I'm "gifted", got u off "balance", cuz da "weight" of my game just "shifted"//

My "sound effects" like from action movies, cuz I seriously "effect" you wit "sound" :: So to finish I got this shit like "broken shoulders".....Hands Down//

Krimson~u~kiddin' I have 2 cremate~a~middleweight when I~just~registered/
U~receive~votes? maybe~a~demote, battlin' a newbie and~gettin'~murked, dat~shit's~irregular/

U say everytime u masturbate god kills~a~kitten/
Well cat somebody must~uv~bust~a~few~nuts before I~started~spittin/

U've been tested thanks fo'~ya~particpation but whack is ya~final~evaluation/
Elevatin' ya skillz is like ya~board~activation dawg u gotta~have~patience/

And as long as~u~takin'................u can take~a~vacation/
Cause u and rap have~no~relation u ain't receive an em~cee~invitation/

U~can't~speak cause u like a broken faucet talkin' wateva ya~brain~leaks, made just~2~delete/
Ya mind is kind uv like an icebox brain, not designed 2~contain~heat/

Aight Krimzon ur turn

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Premey took this 1 better all round............................................. ...................................

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Yeah Premey was better with vocab wordplay and shit.... nice finisher too
Killa dont have so many quotations """""""" only use them 4 meda4s like your hands down line.. plus dont be so corny with your shit.. you have sick ideas jus need 2 be carryed out different.. like your finisher was way too corny.. BUT the idea was great.. plus ur bars are too long


and premey only use~this~ "~~" when you are interbar rhymin'
example
"Krimson you kiddin I have 2 cremate a middleweight when I just clicked~to~register/
U receive votes? maybe a demote, battlin' a newbie and gettin' murked, dat shit's~irregular/


both need more punches like your finisher premey

I LOVE TO HELP LOL VOTE MY SHIT WHEN U SEE IT BOTH OF U!

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HAHA DICKRIDER GOOD EXPLAININ

KRIMZON TOOK DIS SHIT LOOK AGAIN HAHA WHEN I RED HIS RAP SHIT WAS OVA AND OUT

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He can't even vote so how was it a D/R I don't even know him but it don't even matta anyway!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Premy took this shti with better:
Punches
Flow
Wordplay
sweet finisher

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