10-16 lines
no crew/hate/d-r votes
blah blah blah
you said you wanted to go first so go ahead

why's u make two threads? i dun't kno i'm checkin in.........disregard my reply in BS, u tell me u not gonna set itup and u still do? aight then.....i'm in.......11111

whoops...... i meant i was gonna set it up... and i forgot to click "start a battle" lmao... so i had to make another one cause you cnt edit it

damn dawg you are takin a long time....... i might just post tomorrow... wanna just wait? it'lll preolly be a MUCH better battle when we are both awakr

ok yeah im goin o bed......i'll spit manana <----mexican for tomorrrow.... im tired as fuck..... you take too damn long

10-20 u set it up and i'll post first
no crew, dr, or feedin...oneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

those are the original rules.....

now time to die...lol...

that's right son, it's time to fight-my rhymes ignite, strengthen on every flow that's tight...
Ill you'r mental is food, and it's coincedental-counsciously parental' meanin i'm ahed of u'r verbals...
jumpin hurdles, with one leg-rollin like kegs-can't flow hard' then stop throwin-eggs...
u'r blowin feds, just to get to the dope-the rest has been smoked, try and bless i'll have u'r con-text in a rope...
try and hang, and that's the noose-unblack and a goon, plus u'r only ill' while passin the juice...
fast to produce, and keep killin off-my feelings raw-look at the floor' and see the ceilin in thought...
u'r rhymes' about a appealin as' feeling a horse...
i aint stealin, i got the original-sorta sane but unpredictable, feirce i'm take it easy and pierce' ya ventricle...
u;r missin the essentials, why u'r not an exec-u'r whole block is a spec-tryin to stop this-i'll put the glock to ya neck...
ment join ups, so u can have a delivery-u'r a fag i'll dround u in chivalry-rap battle' i'll decapitate u instantly....

u aint ready...i'm dunnnnnn..111111

i was distracted sooory it took so long......just post tomorrow...i came up with summin wuteva...u did answer late...we culda had this dun alredy...but the otha cats where bitches..sooo but i usually dunt take that long....just post manana i'l peep back....oneeeeeeeeeeeeeee

alright..... i totally forgot about this battle.... shows how well known you are.... lmao

this unknown kid thinks he can battle with the vets-
but he gets smoked up fast like roaches, and put out like cigarettes\
better call off all bets cause this battle was set for me to win-
ur a herb, we all know it, 40 times its been proven\
the only thing constant about you, is you fuckin losin streak-
stole a verse while in MM, got kicked out cause you too weak\
dont even speak, cause your verbals be straight herb-
if i said "this kid is a fag", you be the object of the verb\
now you gotta tell me, how does it feel to be merked by a F.A.G.?-
your record is 13-41, you gotta learn not to brag\

ok im done

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Contact...

horrible verse. sorry but it really was. it didn't flow right and it had poor structure. Your lyrics were very simple and when u did try to bring vocab the line didnt even make sense. Sounded like you just tried to use words that didnt even work with one another. It also lacked any real punches. seemed more like an open mic.


Ill Mental<<<F.A.G.

You're shit didn't even need to be that good. You had decent punches and your shit made sense... thats all that mattered. Your structure was good. Lines were short and to the point. You lacked vocab but you didnt really need it. werd on the MM line. kid got voted off like surviver.

Vote: Const... no.. Ill Ment... no.. yeah... Ill Mental

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fuck! i called him contact and i cant edit it...

<<< retard fa sho!

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i couldnt have said it better myself!
can you guys hit this up ?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=69017


peace

ok thx... uppin for some more votes............................................. .................................................. ...................

ok thx... uppin for some more votes............................................. .................................................. ...................