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07-28-03, 08:36 AM
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.-.Marxism.-.
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Just Another Face In The Crowd
IP: C390 5181
I Arise From Hibernation, Damn Not Another Day...
Compirse My Contemplation, I Need Another Way... I Float By, Un-Noticed By Most, Hated By Few... Not Able To Brag Or Boast, Unlike Most Of You... Mind Is A Powerful Tool, I'm Ready To Cock It... See Pops Passed Away, Carried Inside My Locket... I'm That Kid, Rolls By And You Give Me A Hard Time... I'm That Kid, That Ran Away, No-One Went To Find... I'm That Kid, Tries To Creep By Without Notice Aroused... I'm That Kid, Who's Just Another Face In The Crowd... Have My Own Problems, My Own Dilemma, My Own Crux... Ready To Blow, Beginning To Grow, About To Erupt... Roughed Up And Hassled By The Masses Of Peers... Surprised I Made It Past Sixteen Years... Cover-Up A Weakness, Or Else They'll Tear You To Pieces... Staring At The Bleakness, I Know I Must Keep Pushin... Can't Fail, For If I Fall I Won't Land On A Cushion... Constantly Taunted By Those That Surround Me... Someone Take These Ropes And Un-Bound Me... I'm That Kid, Rolls By And You Give Me A Hard Time.... I'm That Kid, That Ran Away, No-One Went To Find... I'm That Kid, Creeps By Without Notice Aroused... I'm That Kid, Who's Just Another Face In The Crowd... Amazing What The Mind Can Achieve When Unrestricted... Had Not Been Held Back, Woulda Been Labelled As Gifted... Teased, Hassled, Knocked Out And Outcast To The Outskirts... It's Hard To Achieve When You Coming From The Dirt... Coulda Been A Doctor, Lawyer, Maybe Found A Cure For Cancer... Too Late, Too Bad, No-One Will Ever Know The Answer... Coulda, Woulda, Shoulda, All Words That Have No Meaning... Cause Your Life Movie, There Is No Second Screening... You Debut, Your First Take Is What Counts All Up... Now You Don't Want Anyone To Take From Your Cup... Outshined, The Movie Reel Doesn't Rewind... It's A Shame How You Destroyed A Mind... I'm That Kid, Rolls By And You Give Me A Hard Time.... I'm That Kid, That Ran Away, No-One Went To Find... I'm That Kid, Tries To Creep By Without Notice Aroused... I'm That Kid, Who's Just Another Face In The Crowd... Before You Put Another Person In A State Of Grief... Think About What An Unrestricted Mind Can Achieve... Leave A Decent Reply And A Link.. And Yours Will Be Peeped |
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07-28-03, 09:24 AM
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.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: 1370 FB1A
Dopenuss...Now How You Like That For A Reply!...
 ...Pz... |
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07-28-03, 11:00 AM
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IP: C1DA C961
This had a hot chorus, Good flow to it...all in all a very good piece. 9/10
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07-28-03, 06:53 PM
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: C390 5181
Bmack... I'll Replies To Yours When I Get Home... Even Though It Was A Severely Half-Ass reply
pz |
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07-29-03, 04:23 AM
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: C390 5181
^Couldn't See One From Bmack...
Uppin... |
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07-29-03, 04:45 AM
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Re: Just Another Face In The Crowd
IP: 9B33 081B
[QUOTE]Originally posted by inspire
Have My Own Problems, My Own Dilemma, My Own Crux... Ready To Blow, Beginning To Grow, About To Erupt... this shit is severly hot i had to turn off the monitor cuz the shit was steaming j/k.Seriously though i liked it, it didn't lag the chorus was hot too, simple but nice i kinda like to hear that on the mic GOOD SHIT MAN 9.5/10 |
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07-29-03, 06:35 AM
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IP: 2CC3 B7CB
^nice Quote..lol^
Rhyming/Flow The Flow Was Dope Dawg. It never Flawed ONce, You had Brutal INterline Rhyming n' Experimented To make Words Rhyme That Don't Normally - 9/10 Vocab/Wordplay Was Nice. Lines LIke: "Teased, Hassled, Knocked Out And Outcast To The Outskirts..." n' "Coulda, Woulda, Shoulda, All Words That Have No Meaning... " - Showed Your Real Ability. You Had Killa Wordplay in Here, Don't See Many Catz Using This Is The Way You Did...9/10 Concept/Topic Never Fell Off. I Personally Thought This Topic Was Dope, Not PLayed OUt Or Anything. You Constructed It into Your Own Style WHich Certainly Paid Off, "Just Another Face In teh Crowd" - This Realates To Nearly Everyone, Who At Some Time Or Another Have Felt This This - Tight...9/10 Overall 9/10, Wasn't Lacking anything really, ONly That Your Verse, Especially The First, Could Have Been Longer..I rarely Give 10's, lol... Word! |
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07-29-03, 06:42 AM
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Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: 399E F0FD
Your Flow Was On Point All The Way Through
I Just Didnt Like Your Chorus But Keep Doing You This Was A Tight Piece Here... Only Seventeen..Sixteen?....Not Bad |
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07-29-03, 06:53 AM
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: C390 5181
Quote:
^No One Likes Lengthy Open Mics... ^I'll Peep Contents Now.. |
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07-29-03, 07:06 AM
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WarLord
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IP: CEF5 716F
EMHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I HATE GREMLINGS....lol
But yea ,,,,,,,,contend wus great....
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I Came Back Like Bustin Nuts On Spinal Chords Try Me Mofuckaz............ |
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07-29-03, 09:23 AM
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: 0A53 C473
^Someone Ban Ruth For One Line Replies
 GIZMO FCUKING PWNS J00!!! |
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07-29-03, 11:01 AM
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IP: 548F C165
LOL @ RUTHLESS and yeah This was bumpin I had to read a second time i liked it so much hehe!
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07-29-03, 11:22 AM
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IP: ADB1 3162
^wHat Are You Laughing At?, Your Reply Wasn't Exactly In-Depth Was It?^
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07-30-03, 03:15 AM
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.-.Marxism.-.
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IP: C390 5181
^Wizzerd.
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07-30-03, 08:22 AM
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I think dat joint was hott
I like da vocab cause u put it 2gether nice I just think it was ill got nuthin' criticizing to say about it lol |
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