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Old 08-01-03, 12:12 PM   #1
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the ying yang

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its the top one saying "the ying yang" dumbass.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/johnny6feetmusic.htm

i hate my delivery as well, lol, fuck it. ima re-do this when i've got time.

lyrics:

(hook)
...without darkness, we couldnt have light/
...without weakness, we couldnt have might/
without ability we can't make this thing-bang/
the perfect balance obtained, call it the ying yang/

(verse 1)
i tilt the scales just right to form the perfect balance/
the eco-system before mankind stood on the planet/
before they evolved to homo sapiens filled with malice/
and the choked the earth half to death with toxic fumes and granite/
i've been a long time coming like Dirk in boogie nights/
i've spent a long time sonning cat, doing my duty right/
the evidence is, i'm making sense kid in all this garbage/
equilibrium was missing since the universe started/
ask who hits the hardest, the one you snitch at/
300 hundred years ago, i wouldve been burned for witchcraft/
you bitch ass, its only fair to warn ya/
even if i was incarnated as a school of pirana's/
you couldnt catch me biting, my rhyming tendencies/
are being perfected enough to be divine eventually/
and it would probably, take the time of centuries/
to catch me, arrest me, try and sentence me/

(hook)

(verse 2)

the bottom line is, my strength would never equal a minus/
people think my golden touch was taken by force from midas/
but i was assigned-it, to correct the mistakes/
the professor on the blackboard, drop knowledge in his wake/
i'm a perfectionist, possibly obsessive complusive/
because i find even the smallest flaw replusive/
my chi energy is focused like a swarm of locusts/
a hive mind move in my time, dont provoke us/
i've found figures that make my brow rise, asking for help/
surely 5% of the people aint stashing the wealth?/
that means 95%, has only 5 to its name/
thats a factor difference of 3-7-1, insane/
so i concluded from this, that in all probability/
theres a single elite group holding the worlds currency/
who are also, running the, nuclear weaponry/
with an underclass of soldier who are all vetenary/

(hook)

blah.
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Old 08-01-03, 01:59 PM   #2
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yeah, delivery needs work but you got a good tone man. lol you sound a lot like Ice-T, no hate or nothin, it's cool.

don't know about that beat. just my opinion.
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Old 08-01-03, 02:21 PM   #3
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LMAO!!! Ice -t, thats it LoL!!!
But for real dunn, I diggin the beat a little (wheres the Bass line?), I understand ya concept, and it's fly too. But I got some Platinum advice for you & your stinky delivery,

MEMORIZE IT!!!!!

Then get drunk and spit it, like you never spit before, lik eyou was on stage and everybody is feelin you!!!!
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