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-Sureal

I'm checking in .
I Don't know
how many that
I am going. But
anyway. Bad
Luck and I Hope
That You Lose.
Uh Huh. . .
Peace.............

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Hi Sandy



i'D say Bad Luck
But Your Really
Gonna Need Sum
Luck So Good Luck
Bro ..

PzZzZzz

let's recocnize that. . .


half the sites on your cock . . . including your mom and jae
so i'm in a akward position. . . cuz for real, she likes it that way
i'll slice at your face. . .til you lay hopin for a few suggestions
my daggers are interested. . .and your hearts open to question
take notes on this lesson. . .you can see my patience stop
your wife's got a pokemon fetish. . .so you turned to asian cock
let the hatin' stop. ..let's make this battle a legend. the best one
cuz i have to admit you stay real . . .almost like sk!llz death was
vets love to hate. . . your not worth this line so i'll shrug, your gay
for a loser you a 'primary' example. .and we can't get one thing straight
but hey, i don't care, just don't talk shit . . . and we won't fight son
i do acknowledge you don't bitch a lot. . .you just walk and talk like one
you've been dirtied . . . right now I can stamp in whiter socks
sand governs rb . . . and it's time to revamp the writer's block
so try and cop some self riches. Lyrical assassin's still an herb' that's worthless. .
and if your my meaning in life. . . . . .. . i just served my purpose

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Fags are what Ya reppin, Sand wasGay back then, Forgettin?
But he Enjoys it .. No Wonder His Sig says He's BackSteppin'

DS? Your losin .. Sand You'll soon See For Yourself
N' i Don't Need fast net Connections, to Hand DS-L's
Duper sand as Himself .. Look, im Handin him Blows
i'll Step on a pebble .. and crush Your Mountain of Goals
Ya Can't handle the Gold, ToNe's known to Split Foes
Sands rockin MetaSins avey, hopin to get Dick Rhode.
iM Sick yo, So Back down .. and This is the Last Call
ToNe's like a Hour Glass, The Way i Make Sand Fall
Ya wack dawg .. a No-Life Nerd, Wit Geek tendencies
This Reject Reloads the Page to Refresh his Memory
Kill any Enemy, knock Ya teeth in, and then beat him
Whispered Win in your ear .. but you couldnt keep a secret
Ya flows leakin, everyone knows Im doper duke
Its funny tho, cuz even midgets have higher hopes then you

bleh blah, : ) .. lmao wordnezz

good luck. . votes?
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that means the opposite.
so . ..................... aljfoaing

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illest line from either of you, best closer ive read ina long time.



yall both came dope. im goin by the "oh damn" factor...


and sand won.

oh damns= 4 for tone-e
and 6 for sand...

I'm cool with both of you so let me break this down. . should be interesting.

half the sites on your cock . . . including your mom and jae
so i'm in a akward position. . . cuz for real, she likes it that way
^No. Needs rewording. The punch sort of makes it sound like you're fuckin Jae. .
i'll slice at your face. . .til you lay hopin for a few suggestions
my daggers are interested. . .and your hearts open to question
^Nah. Seen it flipped better.
take notes on this lesson. . .you can see my patience stop
your wife's got a pokemon fetish. . .so you turned to asian cock
^ lol. That was decient.
let the hatin' stop. ..let's make this battle a legend. the best one
cuz i have to admit you stay real . . .almost like sk!llz death was
^^ Again reword. . you're saying he is fake right ? But it wasn't as direct as it could have been. I'll give you credit it was ok though.
vets love to hate. . . your not worth this line so i'll shrug, your gay
for a loser you a 'primary' example. .and we can't get one thing straight
^^ Nah.
but hey, i don't care, just don't talk shit . . . and we won't fight son
i do acknowledge you don't bitch a lot. . .you just walk and talk like one
^ It was ok. Concept was good. Punch wasn't.
you've been dirtied . . . right now I can stamp in whiter socks
sand governs rb . . . and it's time to revamp the writer's block
^Nice. Best line of your verse. It was fresh.
so try and cop some self riches. Lyrical assassin's still an herb' that's worthless. .
and if your my meaning in life. . . . . .. . i just served my purpose
^^I've flipped it better Sand. lol

Overall you came deceint. Some indirectness and played shit. But other then that I liked it. Nice stuff Sand.

Fags are what Ya reppin, Sand wasGay back then, Forgettin?
But he Enjoys it .. No Wonder His Sig says He's BackSteppin'
^^Nice opener. If people actually get this then they will see the wordplay.

DS? Your losin .. Sand You'll soon See For Yourself
N' i Don't Need fast net Connections, to Hand DS-L's
^^ Oh. I liked this.
Duper sand as Himself .. Look, im Handin him Blows
i'll Step on a pebble .. and crush Your Mountain of Goals
^ Nah.
Ya Can't handle the Gold, ToNe's known to Split Foes
Sands rockin MetaSins avey, hopin to get Dick Rhode.
^ NICE. LMFAO
iM Sick yo, So Back down .. and This is the Last Call
ToNe's like a Hour Glass, The Way i Make Sand Fall
^ Ah. . ok
Ya wack dawg .. a No-Life Nerd, Wit Geek tendencies
This Reject Reloads the Page to Refresh his Memory
^ Nah.
Kill any Enemy, knock Ya teeth in, and then beat him
Whispered Win in your ear .. but you couldnt keep a secret
^ I liked this.
Ya flows leakin, everyone knows Im doper duke
Its funny tho, cuz even midgets have higher hopes then you
^ Blah.

Overall. I think you came pretty freshed. You flipped a few concpets but did it well. Opener was nice. Meta's avvy line was dope.

Vote - Tone-E

Reason- He came fresher and better. Sorry Sand but that's the way it was.

Vote- Tony.

Ue came with harder hittin punches,
mostly just because he had doper
personals and stronger wordplay.

sand, this is the ebst ive ever seen you
come, but your attempts fell short.
some dope lines tho, you just need to
reword them.

Dopest line of the battle:

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My vote=Sand

the whole match was close, but I think Sand had more complex wordplay and punches. Ton-e was ill but I think Sand just had some better lines like his closer was ill and some other lines stood out more than Tone-e's lines. Good shit.

Hmm... i gotta agree with Feeble on the "damn" count, and disagree with Axl... i just don't like the "sand" punches, i think they're played, he could've been original and totally steered clear of that but that DS-L line was tite. sand's was more original howerver and i haven't seen any of those punches before and that finisher "purpose is served" was what won it.

vote=Duper.

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tone got this fo real... he was consistantly hittin wit some good personal punches
sand... had some ight punches, flow wasn't that great and tone's was better... and sand didn't amount to tone's wordplay
vote=tone

sand took this, i felt like his punches hit harder, everything else was so even, this battle was very good, and both emcees came really hard, props to both but i think sand got it, p'z

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this was a damn good battle, but im givin it to sand, i thought that he had some decent wordplay and creativity, tone-e ur shit was hot also, i just feel u didn't come with as good as wordplay as sand did, no hate stay up

poll vote- sand