Here I am again, wit a thought formulatin'/
In my cerebral circulation I start concentratin'/
On obtainin' a new precedent, which style to represent/
Thinking of rhymes that'll cause comotion, and malcontent/
I put the mic to my mouth, forget my troubles/
And I spit complex words, I speak fast as doubles/
this shits off da heezy/believe me/
i spit this shit real eazy/this rhyme is-
leavin yo mind-in along lastin bind- u can't subside/
ull neva get out of-u got nuttin to respond wit/
just drop da mic-and dun spit/
dun rap just get over it-just quit/u got no skill-
hearin just me just spit this- gets ya day started-its a thrill/

short and sweet board so hear ya go

uppin^^^^^

short...but like you said "short an sweet" it was a nice drop i liked the vocab an flow 8/10 nice lil drop keep spitten dawg

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

thanks UPPIN

Nice Drop. Decent I Must Say.
Wow Really Nice Multis. Vocab Was Really Good In This Peice.Really Good. Nice Use Of It. Flow, Different, But I Was Def. Feeling It.
Overall- 8/10

thanks fellas
UPPIN

uppin^^^^^^^^

yo i gotta say that if you had this vocab n shit in your battles you would win alot and if elevated punches youd own cuz a lot of newbs go on punches alone .....some kinda of bull shit.....


nice one

Nice vocab son.Go look at my shit.

thanks playas uppin^^^^^^^^

see the difference is i get thoughts real quik and i spit em when im really battlin in person and win like every time-
but on here in battles my thoughts come to quik and i dun have a lot of time to jot em but i got a lot of good punces...
so thanks for the feedback hope i get some more
UPPIN

Descent shit dawg,well worth a read.