no crew
no hate
10 lines
i'll spit first

yo i'ma raw tha sickest emcee//
tha chances of him beatin me is like shaq hittin a three//
yo gay like micheal jackson//
i'm a winner like john paxson//
u need a doctor cause u got aids//
my rhymes are tighter than ludacris's braids//
i'm like lil flip a freestyle king//
u suck a rappin bad so u need to sing//
u need to elavate cause ur not ready for tha heat//
i'll eat ur newbie ass like ur freshmeat//

ur wack kid don't step 2 me thinkin u hard

lil faggot i'll drop my shit in like 15 min

at the moment ur mom is suckin me up

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Look At This Herb This Cat Obvoiously lost-his-mind,
Cuz I Been Dunkin-More-Nigga Then Dunkin-Hines//1
This Nigga-Elevated And His Rhymes Are Still-Elementary,
My Rhyme-Is-More-Painful Then Gettin Raped In Da Penitentary//2
Ur Lines Couldn't-Be-Ill Even If U Laced-Em-Wit-Anthrax,
U A Stupid Bitch On Ur Period So Go Change-Ur-Tampax//3
Ur Rhymes Is Extremely-Dull... Like kool-aid Wit-No-Taste,
Like Hanson On Scary Movie 2... U Use Ur Toungue To Baste//4
Ur Rhymes Couldn't Be "Complex" Even If U Was "Marc Ecko",
Ur Verse Is "Completley-Harmless" AS If U Was A Gecko//5

iight uppin 4 votes

^^you were supposed to write a verse for a battle, not a poem.
Vote=doctor J
better flow punches and wordplay

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73864

^^hit this up

lol thanx

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once i get 100, ima come n vote for doctor j... better punches and wordplay...

hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...=8%3D%3D%3D%3DD

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j nigga u got this wit ease

ur punches was hot
nice structure
ok flow but better than FK

nice battle nigga

^^^

thanx 4 voting

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Dr J ........... takes it .......... his verse was tight enought to win .........FSK , you had some good lines , but dey were too short , and it did kinda of look like apoem instead of a spit ........ Just use your punches in a longer verse and you should be aiight.

Vote- Dr. J

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73771

Hit dis up , if you can ........... Honest Votes only

Peace
CE

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