Chorus:
My music is for the world to see bright with colors and shapes,
like the raw feeling you get in the heat of action after the rubber breaks.
My music is the truth so let it embrace your mental state,
this ain't no one hit wonder you'll be making love to my music after the first date. My music...(2x)

Verse:
My music is needed across this earth like drugs and sex,
so I created a harmony that unifies love and respect,
but bust rounds of fire like thugs with tecs.,
I'm teaching through my lyrics to move my grimy niggas from the mud to desks.
My plan is to develop a sound that will erase racism,
take that kid that's mad at the world and get rid of the hate in em',
and leave the globe happier when I'm done so we can stop with the fake grinning,
get my dogs out the beast of the penile so they can start a straight begginning.
We've been here for too long with mainstream getting plaques and going plat.,
while the real artistic music keep getting jacked and pushed to the back for a well known producer to touch the track.
My music is here to start a revolution of kids climbing from the basement with smiles on their faces,
the only reason why I'm able to concoct lines like these is because my father has been so gracious.
I want my words to be the new revised theme for the whole meaning of hip hop,
I'm trying to impregnate this life with raw music so I gotta make sure I type to make sure broads and dudes get knocked.
But I gotta do it now I can't wait for doctors and 9 months,
the mission is to craft my skills to eat big and drop ya rhymes of funk.
My music is universal hard hitting from coast to coast,
and I'm trying to spit like crazy until my voice sounds like Tone Loc's,
and when it goes out totally and I turn broke I'll be right back here on rapbattles.com that ain't no joke.
Touch my music you'll enjoy the warmth that it gives you when it overtake your body,
cause I'm here to make you feel it like seeing your ex at the party with Martie after taking ecs.(ecstacy) and a shot of bacardi.

Chorus:
My music is for the world to see bright with colors and shapes,
like the raw feeling you get in the heat of action after the rubber breaks.
My music is the truth so let it embrace your mental state,
this ain't no one hit wonder you'll be making love to my music after the first date. My music...(2x)

this was ight..not bad..but not real good..pretty nice read overal..not much i havent heard before..flow was ight..some long lines tho..is this intended for audio?..cause if not..y the hook?..tone loc line stood out the most..i liked that 1..not a bad read like i said..keep it up..

GOOD LOOKING KID, I WAS JUST HAVING FUN WITH IT YA KNOW! KEEP HOLLERING THOUGH! ONE!

My music is needed across this earth like drugs and sex,
so I created a harmony that unifies love and respect,

After that, shit fell off... decent in some spots... but, other than the opening verse, nothing I've never heard before...

COOL, BUT KEEP JUDGING AIIGHT. THANKS, PEACE!

pretty ill i was feelin it

My music is for the world to see bright with colors and shapes,
like the raw feeling you get in the heat of action after the rubber breaks.
My music is the truth so let it embrace your mental state,
this ain't no one hit wonder you'll be making love to my music after the first date. My music...


Nice Chorus I Must Say. Cocky Son Of A Bitch. lol Just Playin Wit Cha. Anyways, Decent Drop. Topic Was Good, Makes Ya Sound Cocky, But No Harm In Dat Right? haha. Vocab, Good. Flow, Eh, Fell Off At Times, Just Try To Even Out Your Bars, Ight Playa? Nice Drop...

Overall- 8/10

APPRECIATE THAT KID, KEEP HOLLERING! NO COCKINESS HERE MY MAN, JUST TRYING TO HANG W/ YOU BIG DOGS W/ 17-8! HOLLA BACK!

it fell off in alot of places. it felt like nothing new, but it was a decent drop. Alot of meta's were good but other were Blah....it was a cool drop, you need to work some more, but it was good.
return the favor and peep my piece "Rage of a mortal", lookin for some good feedback.
peace

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