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Old 08-06-03, 02:34 PM   #1
JOE BLACK
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Just Give Me 10 Mins Freestyle

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just give me 10 minuets to see what i see out the blue/
to do what i do, chill out side and see my crew/
come on take a walk with me on my block/
then you will not ask why we all hate cops/
my life is screwd and choped like it's been put in a blender/
open wounds i smell that are juicy and tender/
like a savage beast wants to come out and talk/
but shit what comes out of me when i get pissed is the incredible hulk/
some times i get to cocky indestructible/
like scarface feeling untouchible/
do you feel me if not you not a real gangster or thug/
cuz eery one feels hate and love/
now give me 10 minuets to just show you around/
and show you how we get down/
what the fuck we do in our town/
better yet the state,i know some kids who only move weight/
and don't care if they get 10 years on the plate/
as long as they eat and they feel that they are doing their thing/
all while there shining wit bling and hear cash go ka ching/
when see connects we re up at our best/
but like floetry when feans want us to sell we say yes/
but give me 10 minuets you don't want to live hear/
you don't wanna shed tears,for boys who past through the years/
you wanna leave but you can't you injoy the hustle/
always getting stronger flexing muscle/
well that's 10 minuets you can leave if you want/
still try to breath if you want,maybee even roll a blunt
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Old 08-06-03, 02:35 PM   #2
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who wanna battle ya boy
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Old 08-07-03, 12:40 AM   #3
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come on hook me up wit some replies
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Old 08-07-03, 12:50 AM   #4
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I'll battle u...go set it up in the battle section lol...

peace
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Old 08-07-03, 01:01 AM   #5
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it was good for a freeatyle, good word usage needs better vocab but if it was a true freetyle then thats ok cuz thats dificult i jus say keep elevating with the rest of us and put ur talets to use
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