Artist: Verballyill aka Verbal ShellS aka Eyedeal aka Tha Prominence
Song: recap of Tha life I live (remix)
Aim: PoeticThreat



I started as a young kid, going to adolescent/
Influence by all the bad shit, that ama leave anonymous/
Got popularity by my brother, an also by my rhyming shit/
Got put in the spotlight, in moments unexpected so I had to incite/
The crowds before being rejected, you get caught if you recite/
I was considered a weapon, battling veteran emcees when I was barely eleven/
With my boy Krazzie that encouraged me, battling anyone just to murder emcees/
Girls aiming for show offs, I wasn’t in that category but that’s no flaw/
Hatred became like the holocaust, most with glass jaws try to front but lost/
Gambling at low cost, crabs and ceelo with no pause with my people/
Aiming towards the harmful drugs that be illegal, just to fit in and feel lethal/
Expansions of this sequel, sincere looking girls end up street hoes/
In everyway you meet foes, merchandise not much time to keep those/
There were grimy peeps that stole, some that dedicate their money to getting stoned/
Bursting blood vessels, of vengeance that’s never settled/
The people were narrowed, by their ways, looks of whose ghetto/
The nerds and herbs were veto, the gays and fagots listened to techno/
The gangsters were rebels, admired in different grade levels/
The Gothic’s were made devils, seemed as if they pray evil in temples, cruel mental/
Getting high and drunk that’s the only moment we sentimental and gentle/
Hope came from a composition and pencil, our only utensils/
The life live call it suspenseful, cause u never know what’s gonna happen yo/
Wasn’t looking for recognition but I was very eminent, attracted by str8 nigguhs and girls very feminine/
Nigguhs called me eminem, just cause I was white and rhyming showing no pleasantness/
Few made fun of my braces and they needed to use crest again/ here’s were it ends friends/
Krazzie and Verbal at it mescaline/

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Nice...good flow..Very serious topic,u worded it well though!

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