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it feels good to freestyle again....ok here we go
The unbreakable been has been broken/ Werd is born and the truth has been spoken/ I be seein 50 cent and how he's a P.I.M.P/ seemin money must be beautiful, cuz this nigga is ugly/ Well I see Bow Wow is back hittin us with a new song/ it featured Baby,but he ain't rap,cuz that would be Wrong/ And whats up with this Bone Crusher song, why is that played/ He Sings doesn't rap, and his song gets stuck all day/ I'm seein Chingy is really makin it happen/ If he puts out anything whacker than "Right thurr" i'ma quit rappin/ George Bush has really become a force in our nation/ Took us from 9/11 to war to a state of desperation/ I wonder how he'd become president if his dad wasn't there/ and adding to that, thats not make-up,but alot of cocaine he'd wear/ ScarFace would be jealous and come back to life in 2003/ Freddy vs. Jason, probably becomin the most hyped whack flick in history/ Unless it turns out to be good, savin both of these franchise/ but if its not, its gonna be like George Washington tellin lies/ It ain't gonna happen.... On another note though i feel bad for J.Lo/ she's goin out with a fag, and her last film ranked low/ She's gonna get married, then breakup to months after/ This is like watching Sliks picture thread,so played,no more laughter/ Well im gonna leave ya now, but i have one more thing to say/ I don't like Ashanti's new song, till it's time to masturbate/ Awwe baby
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LACKED ALIL BUT WAS HOTT NONE THE LESS I LIKED IT THE NEWS ALMOST LIKE MAD SKILLZ YEAR ROUND UP
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like word said..this lacked a lil..a good read..some nice lines..nice ideas..just didnt throw it all together as good as i think u couldve..it told a lot..real informative..kinda funny in some parts..it was just simple..the flow was real simple..add some multis..spice it up a bit..and work on ya spell n..some lines just didnt make sense to me..
i scarface dead?..save both these franchise?.. not bad tho..a good read.. |
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Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
thank you, uppin
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