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Old 08-11-03, 09:37 PM   #1
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it feels good to freestyle again....ok here we go

The unbreakable been has been broken/
Werd is born and the truth has been spoken/
I be seein 50 cent and how he's a P.I.M.P/
seemin money must be beautiful, cuz this nigga is ugly/
Well I see Bow Wow is back hittin us with a new song/
it featured Baby,but he ain't rap,cuz that would be Wrong/
And whats up with this Bone Crusher song, why is that played/
He Sings doesn't rap, and his song gets stuck all day/
I'm seein Chingy is really makin it happen/
If he puts out anything whacker than "Right thurr" i'ma quit rappin/
George Bush has really become a force in our nation/
Took us from 9/11 to war to a state of desperation/
I wonder how he'd become president if his dad wasn't there/
and adding to that, thats not make-up,but alot of cocaine he'd wear/
ScarFace would be jealous and come back to life in 2003/
Freddy vs. Jason, probably becomin the most hyped whack flick in history/
Unless it turns out to be good, savin both of these franchise/
but if its not, its gonna be like George Washington tellin lies/
It ain't gonna happen....
On another note though i feel bad for J.Lo/
she's goin out with a fag, and her last film ranked low/
She's gonna get married, then breakup to months after/
This is like watching Sliks picture thread,so played,no more laughter/
Well im gonna leave ya now, but i have one more thing to say/
I don't like Ashanti's new song, till it's time to masturbate/
Awwe baby
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Old 08-11-03, 09:46 PM   #2
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LACKED ALIL BUT WAS HOTT NONE THE LESS I LIKED IT THE NEWS ALMOST LIKE MAD SKILLZ YEAR ROUND UP
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Old 08-12-03, 12:24 AM   #3
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like word said..this lacked a lil..a good read..some nice lines..nice ideas..just didnt throw it all together as good as i think u couldve..it told a lot..real informative..kinda funny in some parts..it was just simple..the flow was real simple..add some multis..spice it up a bit..and work on ya spell n..some lines just didnt make sense to me..

i scarface dead?..save both these franchise?..

not bad tho..a good read..
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Old 08-12-03, 01:11 PM   #4
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thank you, uppin
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