this is some stuff that I layed down a couple days ago, lemme know what yall think

mic check..one..two...
ima be spittin this for you
you bein whoever is listenin

come to the 7-6-5 where the parties rock
and they last all night on my block
rollin on 20s is how we ride
the 5-0 see us and they hide
cuz they cant touch us
cant even catch us...might as well take the bus
this is my town..n you best believe
that i need no one to help me
keepin' everyone on the lock down
what i say goes
ill be pimpin all deez ho's
but there's a couple shorties
that can roll wit me
wit out em under my arm
i might be inclined to cause some harm

in the 7-6-5
we keepin it live
the strongest always survive
but thius is my town so dont clown

now there are some cats that wanna rap
but even the 6 years old think theyre crap
so ima keep all this rap shit true
you wont make it outta k town unless im dow wit you
best believe ima keep it real
every word i spit
earnin me another 24 inch rim
keepin these lights on dim
so yall cant see
you know you'll approach me
askin to get on a track
i went to high school wit you?
really? thats cool
ill tear you up on the mic
havin all the girls like
we're from the 7-6-5

in the 7-6-5
we keepin it live
the strongest always survive
but thius is my town so dont clown

when yall see me on the strip
hit me up cuz i got the 4-1-1
on where we go to have fun
shit even the christian girls roll wit me
cuz they know the ride is free
for the parties we be leavin the city
and rollin 20 miles thru the country
out til 6 am and the party aint even gonna start
til like 8 am cuz we gotta tear you apart
we're not eva gonna get n e sleep
rollin three deep in the '04 jeep
listen to the poundin from the subs
on those chromed out dubs
we always roll around till night
lookin for one last fight
up in the 7-6-5

in the 7-6-5
we keepin it live
the strongest always survive
but thius is my town so dont clown

This was the whackest piece of shit I've ever read in my life.

Why is there a mic check in a text drop? YOu have the gayest rhyme scheme ever...



LMMFAO.... quit while u haven't wasted anymore of your time... or mine you fuckin piece of shit.

hmmm..wow..where do i start?..1st of all..how long was the audio?..cause ya bars was real short..this was wack..in all honesty..im surprised i read the whole thing..flow was simple..real simple..no multis..and what were u talk n bout?.how old are u?..the take the bus line?..what was its purpose?..it didnt fit in..and made no sense..not a good way to rep ya area..id be ashamed if i lived in 765..cause be n completely honest..this was shitty..u got a lot of elevate n to do..

Get Tupac out of your sig too, don't disrespect that man.

this wasn't the greatest drop i like simplistic stuff but i agree that this is a little to simplistic. i would try to add some more visual words to bring out what you're saying keep dropping and elevating don't let anyone talk you outta what you love. 1

nigga please dat shit was tight i loved da flows da rhymes were off da hook, u r so so so so so fucking talented i dont know where to start.like when u said wit out da shorties under ya arm u might cause some harm. it so amazing how u didnt quite tell da reader that if u diddnt have da girls under ya arm u would fuck some guy in da ass, BRILLIANT!!!,an who can forget"we always roll around at night looking for one last fight"BRILLIANT how u told but didnt quite tell dat ya gay,i mean what type of guy rolls around wit girls looking for a fight? me being straight id be trying to get some pussy bo noooooooo not u , u wanna fight
hahahahahahahahahahaha ya fucking rhymes suckkkkkkkk to high HELL give up rapping an make money selling ya ass on da
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