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08-12-03, 12:42 PM | #1 | |||||||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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*BLuNT-MaTiC TacTics* KEYSTYLE
IP: 26E5 19E6
point blank pages spitted with percision like a direct hit on tha pitiful bitches..
I consider my sadistic images a little jittery when I'm listnin'... not shakey, shivering in ya spinal column so hard ya slip a disc an it falls out... like an ecstacy addict when he falls down, fuck a call out!.. I'm all about bomin' a sound on all ya clowns ta leave ya faces painted red... traces of death infested in places I've frequent-ed... names range from steven to fred, hold up!! gim'me a sec... reasons I lead this game still goin' over my head... I don't know how this shit happened, it just did..... I just dust kids like a terrorist with no concience... I promise... I'm-a never tell a word of truth in any my topics... 'cause all I say in my rhymes is a whole lot-a tall lies... the only thing real in my verse is when I say I'm on lines... PEACE
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08-12-03, 03:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
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Not bad for a keystyle, needed lengthening to make it a full-on piece, but the flow was there, mainly because of your internals, you attempted a couple similies and bits of wordplay in there, the multi's helped it too, kept the flow downpacked and such, nothing really to flaw because it was only a keystyle, but i suggest when you drop a full-open mic piece you work on your imagery and emotion and write to a set topic such as love / hate, that will test you a little more.
Not bad though, you have the basics down, just work on it i guess. Reply to my piece: ! |
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08-12-03, 04:19 PM | #3 | |||||||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: 26E5 19E6
basics... lol.... ok
thanx 4 the comment... as 4 topic.. I don't like set topics, I like just yammering on in shit, make u think I'm sick in my head.. lol... but it's all good.. 1 uppin!!
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08-12-03, 04:30 PM | #4 | |||||||
The sYcKlE Makes Me Do It
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IP: BED3 7E96
I thought it was dope
I like the sick shit much better than that back packin crap |
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08-12-03, 04:44 PM | #5 | |||||||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: 26E5 19E6
lol... tha's what I'm say'n man... fuck love/hate topics.. I ain't ja-rule... I'm a white boy with too much time on my hands...
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08-12-03, 04:53 PM | #6 | |||||||
The sYcKlE Makes Me Do It
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