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Old 08-20-03, 09:07 PM   #1
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Post Held In The Middle.

IP: 34BF DD77

I See,
Inactualitie's
of people....
Staring.....

What!..........

fixated,
eye's glued
connected
PVA Used...
Re-Used
Spins forward
Momentarily
i slip......
Land on Leg's
Extend Wit
Clip to peg,
hung....
hangin unity,
Purity,
this is your pity,
used on me

Why?

In Essence
Of Subliminal
dis-incline
from mine
form yours
Escape
Through Door's

Trapped!!!!
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Old 08-21-03, 02:19 PM   #2
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Hello..............
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Old 08-21-03, 03:10 PM   #3
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This was Ok

Good Vibe to it

Hard to folow the meaning but
was still a good apeice
and worth reading

10ne
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Old 08-21-03, 07:15 PM   #4
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Society in general judging you?

Or looking at you more intensely because you are different?

But the meaning i got in the end. And decided was the most relevant. Was a person who has a disability/dis-figurment (along those lines). And people (society) is looking at him/her with intrigue/horror and pity. Especially pity. Which irritates you, as you it makes you feel even more isolated and distant. Even more different. A constant reminder..

I liked the approach. With a flowing bluntness bringing forth the imagery, whilst slightly hiding the layers of meaning.

...resp;..
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Old 08-21-03, 09:37 PM   #5
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^Dayum your good

Yea spot on.
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