"Outlaw" ["My Ambitions of a Ridah" Beat by Tupac

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy

I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw!

I'm an Outlaw, I'm fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//

I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw!

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//

[Verse 1]
My nigga I'm tired of the way they treatin me//
I'm about to go full blast on the niggas make em sleep//
I try to positive but they won't let it work//
trippin over my lyrics which is just absurd//
now what I can do is straight up kill you//
come up in your crib let my niggas drill you//
you may have thought I was optimist, but that's in the past//
you on the ground gettin roughed by someone who's changed fast//
maybe a few years ago you would want to get my ass kicked//
a few years laters I leave these bitches in their caskets//
yea that's right, it's not Michael Withers anymore//
it's a changed mutha fucka walkin through that door//
cock it back bang bang, yea he's well hurt//
layin in the dirt, blood splattered on his shirt//
a feared mutha fuck, yo I'm nothin less//
better wear your vest, I told you mayn I'm an Outlaw//
I don't take shit, even if you was my kin//
niggas know it, I'll bust some Jason shit on your men//
too many cowards on the street come and try to test me//
they learn the hard way I'll put it simply//
it's a sad thing, when your all alone, just you//
by yourself, it's the pride that flows in you//
tryna start beef yea it's a cold thing//
I show them off with the Pop Pop Bang Bang//
you really think I give a damn if you hurt//
there's too many demons in my brain that lurk//
Common sense man, I told how I've change //
guess what, . . . I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

[Verse 2]
You commin back for more who the hell do you think you is?//
I'm like Mike Lowrey except I don't live in bliss//
cold-hearted, thats what everyone sees me ass//
well then guess what nigga I don't give a fuck about your ass//
and you cops y'all need to stop that brutality//
y'all acted like pussies when you heard from Ice-T//
a heart dark, as the color of black//
it seems everyday I need to watch my back//
An Outlaw, so I don't give a hell//
I ain't scared to die I already know I'm goin to hell//
Lord I ask for forgivness and please show me the light//
I've done too much sinnin in my mutha fuckin life//
My sides, are hard all over//
no time for a side of a nigga bein sober//
leavin mothers mournin their son with sad tears//
get ready to fear, I told you mayn I'm an Outlaw//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

[Verse 3]
the niggas know it, I don't give a fuck//
but when the beef comes I make all these niggas duck//
beefin with some pussies I don't even know//
due to this bitch that acts like a sophisticated ho//
I need to forgive but yo I just can't forget//
I wish that day never happened where we met//
I'm gettin through the hatin, but theses pussies don't//
when they see in da real all they do is damn choke//
my own friends have been shocked by my sudden changes//
it's da anger inside that makes me leave them hangin//
I'm a menace, that's why you can't finish//
what you did in the past cuz I'll come and kill this//
it's a shame the way I got caught up in the mix//
rest in peace Pac, you still thuggin in the bricks//
Renegades and Soldiers told yall how I was//
it was a hit, but some still didn't get the message cous//
my image scarin some of these niggas thoughts//
when are you gonna be a man and finish what you sought//
it's my image scarin some of these niggas thoughts//
when are you gonna be a man and finish what you sought//
the moral of the story is to leave me alone//
go on with your bussiness, cuz I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//
I'm tellin you I give no mercy//
you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally//

I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me//

uppin

Yo stop sleepin!!!!!

Nice piece dawg , people are sleeping on this because it's kinda long , but I'm telling u people , this piece is worth reading , Anyways dawg your ability too spit some hard lyrics shined in this piece , First of all ur wordplay was kinda weak.....Content was Tight......Ur multies were Tight.....But you fell off in some parts.......For example.......

now what I can do is straight up kill you//
come up in your crib let my niggas drill you//
you may have thought I was optimist, but that's in the past//
you on the ground gettin roughed by someone who's changed fast//

^^^^^^That was whack right there.........But you made up for it in the other 3 lines................The only thing u need too elevate on , has to be ur VOCABULARY...........Just elevate on that , and u will get better.................Overall u get a 7.9/10..............Check ur P-M , because I sent u a message

thanx man uppin.

very ill i thought... dont really matta about multis and werdplay and all dat in real life but da lyrics wuz tight as fuck... i like how u did dat outlaw thing in every part... tight dawg... would be happy to collab

^I agree, that piece was ill dogg. PROPS!

Return the favor by hittin this battle up with a vote:
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that was a dope peice, i was feelin that from the start...prolly sound good in audio cuz of how the flow was on point...keep droppin

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Aight man....that was pretty dope....u used good imagery and shit....the begging was real tight and u personilzed it and used good vocab....practise this piece out loud and work it with some audio man...U were real throughout the piece and i was feelin it...keep it coming dawg...

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aiiight dunny...about the Omens thing...I gots to collabz wit'cha before I let ya join...

uppin

good shit dude. the wordplay was pretty good, the flow was tight, and the content was awesome. the whole outlaw idea kicked ass and cant wait to read some more of ur shit, keep postin

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