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Old 05-24-03, 07:53 PM   #1
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B.R.E. Presentz : For The Soldierz...........

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...............this is to all da soldierz and trooperz whoz life is kurupted by bad shit....dont give up....heres my story

...born in to poverty, me and my mama, backz against da wind
she had her second child at 23, and i became da fatha of him
i hated this world, why did this have to fuckin happen to me
i wouldnt let go of da anger inside...i jus couldnt let it be
then came the devilz from hell....terror is what they brought
evil came in, took over my lifeless life, and this is what i thought...
.......... Fuck em all.....but this aint my world no more
shit, watched my future fall and crash.....broken on da floor
like my life was holdin da handle.....and my fate closed da door
bury my self in sorrow....fillin empty cups wit empty drinks
if i where a type of animal.....then my life is drivin me extinct
my battle tactiucs had failed....now i had to stop drop and think
lik a sno ball the as i got bigga pain kept growin and growin
lik i had a big ass hole in my body, but fuckin no one was sowin
tried 2 turn my life around, but i was just such a fuckin fool
it was one thing after anotha, lik i was swimin in an empty pool
then bitches kept playin me, afta a while i jus couldnt fall in love
turned 2 a lif of crime, pac influenced, mamas lil boy was a thug
cockin gun afta gun loadin clip afta clip, hated this shit, sick of it
then i jus had dropped the weaponz, i knew that i had to admit
open the church doorz ,and i went to the alter , and jus prayed
let god and jesus into my heart,......then the evil as dismayed
to all the trooperz, if u take godz handz, u can climb da boulderz
this is advice from a warrior.....a story........for da soldierz.........

............much love yall
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Old 05-24-03, 09:22 PM   #2
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Deep drop man,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I was feelin it.........Emotional shit right here........................Flow was onpoint...........Content was Ill
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Old 05-24-03, 09:26 PM   #3
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tight, tight, tight...... content was real, only thing i would say was flow was lackin slightly, but fuck dat i liked it fosure, deep shit respect..... uppin for da playa
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Old 05-24-03, 09:58 PM   #4
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Uppin for my boy
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Old 05-24-03, 10:13 PM   #5
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Deep shit fam. UPPIN FOR MY NIGGA
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Old 05-24-03, 10:18 PM   #6
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This wasn't bad man. Your flow was decent. Had some nice lines here and there, and others were aight. I can tell this was from the heart. If this was your real life 'n shit, I'm sorry man. If not, you wrote it well. Imagery wasn't bad at all either.

Great Piece.

Be on the look out for another one coming up tonight!

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Old 05-25-03, 02:04 AM   #7
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Still uppin for my Family
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Old 05-25-03, 11:13 AM   #8
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Some real good shit right there... I be feelin' it..... Real tight shit man
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Old 05-25-03, 11:17 AM   #9
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i liked it ... keep droppin
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Old 05-25-03, 12:37 PM   #10
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........thx yall....i appreciate da feedback.....and weezy.....yea datz my life........it may suck dick.....but i gotz sumthin 2 write about.......still uppin yall.....
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Old 05-25-03, 01:07 PM   #11
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.....quit sleepin yall.........
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Old 05-25-03, 02:16 PM   #12
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i was really feelin this shit this was a nice post you kept this real and kept it flowin this was some hottness
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Old 05-25-03, 07:07 PM   #13
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^^^^ thx.....still uppin......
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Old 05-26-03, 04:23 PM   #14
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.....c'mon yall....fuckin sleep 2 much..........
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Old 08-14-03, 09:05 PM   #15
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I see u're looking at this...Well I'm a up it for u....U Inactive mutha fucka...Just playing...............But why you're so inactive???

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