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Old 08-14-03, 05:15 PM   #1
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ILoveYou,EvenThoughYouaBitch

IP: B47A 7630

ILoveYou,EvenThoughYouABITCH!


Love, Several Meanings, My Favorite, Trust And Sex
Be Happy Or Played, Like Pimps, You Could Be Next
Life Is Complex, But We All Find Ways Around It
We All Have Our Problems, But We Have Psychaitrists(spelling?)
You Must Admit, There Are Days Where You Suffer
Mine Was Just Recently, Cuz I Almost Lost Her

Chorus:
Life Can Be So Hard And Unfair
Goes So Fast, Its Just A Glare
But Just Dont Stare, I Promise Its There
You'll Find Love, You'll Find Someone Who Cares

Sat Quietly Listening To Her Breath On The Phone
She Was 'Next' To Me, But I Felt So Incredibly Alone
So I Changed My Tone, I Got Mad, I Wanted To Let Go
16 Months Of Memories, In My Mind They Wouldnt Show
No, Im Making A Mistake, This Is My Heart, My Love
My Partner, My Angel That Was Sent Up From Above
We Were Like Two Doves, Best Friends, Belong Together
We Spent Our Time Talking,Laughing,Our Love Lasts Forever...

Chorus:
Life Can Be So Hard And Unfair
Goes So Fast, Its Just A Glare
But Just Dont Stare, I Promise Its There
You'll Find Love, You'll Find Someone Who Cares

It Was 4 Days Till The Next Time We Exchanged Words
I Finally Came Out Of The Darkness, Alone, Felt So Hurt
Wiped The Tears, Swept Off The Dirt, Tried To Smile
We Took Our Time, Talked Slow, Though It Took A While
That Was Our 8Mile, But Now, Were A Tougher Team
Mine Forever, And Of Course She's My Everlasting Dream


Chorus:
Life Can Be So Hard And Unfair
Goes So Fast, Its Just A Glare
But Just Dont Stare, I Promise Its There
You'll Find Love, You'll Find Someone Who Cares
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Old 08-15-03, 12:20 AM   #2
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i think that this was a decent peace...subject matter was good and you could tell that it was deep. but some parts were just....bad to put it honestly.


Love, Several Meanings, My Favorite, Trust And Sex
Be Happy Or Played, Like Pimps, You Could Be Next

^ that for example. i dont feel that it fit anywhere into the rest of the piece and sort of drug the rest down.

other than the few occausional blemishes this was a good drop..


6.5/10
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Old 08-15-03, 02:07 AM   #3
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iiightttttt

Basically just keyed this shit....it was kinda shitty, but thanks for the reply...
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