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Old 08-15-03, 02:09 PM   #1
THE DALABIL
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Oh...
Now I want the thick rims and "all" - the phat stacks too son...I'm trying to "ball" - and be up in the grammies like some of "ya'll" - I got that "stall" "fall" after the pride "call"

and...

now I spit it "sick-lay" - it's kinda "trick-kay" - it seems "wit-tay" but I dont walk it "it-tay" - vocab be "bit-tay" - I'll still meet you half court for the cause and bring it to yo'azz "grit-tay"

so...

dont be surprised when I rise like the rest of "ya'll" - keeping my eyes on the prize of the best of "ya'll" - protective lies - feel my cries when I'm addressing "ya'll" - cause I'm gon'drive till I surmise what's protecting "ya'll"

now gimme them "hand claps" - and gimme them "high five's and daps" - keep your gun shots and "slaps on the back" - they "both mean jack" and I "got it like that" I been in this "rap" since "back" when Denzel was still "sporting a gap"...

now I can be that "cat" in a brim "hat" rolling a 'Lack talking bout "bread to stack"...but "check the track"....

see where the flow will "take you"...
it aint that I "hate you"...
you know them rules you spoke first so I had to "bake you"....

I come "dipping through"
"dripping with my boo"....
three wheel motion like we straight pimping as a "preview"
fist balled up and I'm "spitting a few"
just to quiet the quoting...you know how "we do"

dawg...

no "grams" no ~pounds~ to spread across these ~towns~ and "lands"....
boogie BK to ~Stocktown~ to "Japans"....
I got big ego....little minds and "slant eyed fans"....
all claiming DALABIL to be they "mans".....

because I am the original....

thats loaded and locked with "clips" of lyrics designed and molded for they "fits" into blocks with circles of "gifts" dripping sticky with "spits" off of money selling these dimes as "nicks" and chasing this "grip"...
thats off of this "grime"
see you thought you'd benched BILLY but son I don slipped up off of the "pine" and I'm loving the "shine"
its Monday night and its "prime time"
with this message...
the WORLD IS MINE!!
said the Lord.
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Old 08-15-03, 08:38 PM   #2
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ummm..honestly..this was wack..and y did u quote ur multis?..flow was ehhh..so so..multis was very very simple..if u even wanna call em multis..this seemed like a pointless piece..had no message in it..u rep'd ya self..but it wasnt good at all..stop put n " " around ya rhyme n words..its stupid and pointless..work on ya flow..and definately complexity..or i can guarantee ull get no crits..
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