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Old 06-22-03, 12:38 AM   #1
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Sharp Perfection.
 
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Arrow dread, regret

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dread, regret//
no knowledge of whats coming yet//
panic, delirios//
taking over body, cover no looking furious//
hurt heart, soul running//

Dont like mortals to know how i feel//
hold things making me mind blow up in mess//
keeping them in let other ppl heal//
not wanting ppl to know,hate when try to guess//
eyes flashing, smells clashing//

im not normal i can feel it inside//
pushing its self way up franticaly hurried//
swallow it down keep hidden, hide//
never touched always unnoticed, no worries//
hands cutting, body shaking//

pull on the long sleves, dont let anyone see//
wear the stone mask, fake smile happyness//
no one thinks twice, shes real happy with he//
but she has lost some spirit, not talkative//
feet shiffling, scars fading//

ppl start to fade, no blur//
shoving loves all out of my life//
no one dares to talk, no stir//
my mind racing frantically, pick up the knife//
blood dripping, fingers trembling

dread, regret
no knowledge of whats coming yet//
Panic, delirios
taking over my body, cover no looking furious
heart hurt, soul running......

yeah nothing much just alot on my mind
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Old 06-27-03, 08:51 AM   #2
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what the heck you doing man? any ppl who really what to upp are welcome to it
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Old 06-27-03, 04:56 PM   #3
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dont worry...he was already banned

but yeah this piece is actually self explanatory...nothing much to it

the vocabs are good..the flow was alright..the whole content was quite interesting ..not too typical...

well drop more!
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Old 06-28-03, 03:31 AM   #4
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nice piece girl, real deep, kinda depressing thou, stay up, keep flowin, u good
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Old 08-20-03, 02:42 PM   #5
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thx all keep uppin
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