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Old 08-16-03, 01:51 PM   #1
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Dreams of fuckin an R&B chick.....

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Late place a scripture ta paint my picture/
Id take many women & throw em in tha mixture/
Throw em all together like a mad scientist/
& have tha perfect woman,vibe with this..........

Take Eves tities from Barbershop & Lil Kims sexuality/
Lil Mo's voice & Janet Jacksons personality/
Ashantis eyes & Mary Bliges soul/
Faith Evans ass & youd get a suprisin mold/
A sense of humor like Alicia/
A need for respect like Aretha/
Beyonces hips & Kellys lips/
Ameries legs & Mariahs age/
Skip ta tha Brittney & Christina/
I wanna bitch with a peaceful demeanor/
Play ha position & stay where she supposed to/
& when I got her on tha counter in tha kicthen she can hit them vocals/
A chick with braids & high heel stilettos/
Gets shit settled & down ta hold metal/
A project bitch, but with a age-exceedin soul/
Down ta pass walk through tha cold ta see her man locked down kuz he sold/
A chick with tha perfect body & can sing ta tha Heavens/
An R&B chick,famous for her vocal sessions/
But who still down ta Earth,treats others equally/
An R&B chick ta plant my seed in & give a piece of me..ONE
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Old 08-16-03, 01:56 PM   #2
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funny shit,would be a crazy concoction,i wouldn't mind fuckin her,lol.

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Old 08-16-03, 02:02 PM   #3
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we could run train on dat bitch.....lol. sike i would keep dat to my self like any other male would
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Old 08-16-03, 02:04 PM   #4
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u damn right
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Old 08-17-03, 12:06 AM   #5
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any body feelin dat?
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Old 08-17-03, 01:20 AM   #6
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this was pretty inventive, liked the whole concept, and it was enjoyable. One thing though:You need a better flow struncture,but other than that good piece.
return the favor and peep my piece "Life is Over" it'd be appreciated.
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