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08-23-03, 04:44 PM
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Gangsta Shiz (freestyle)
IP: ABE5 5A5C
Its ya boy postman with another free... i know ya ready to hear a song... my producer wont let me put my studio work on here so it looks like i gotta do it myself... So i made a quick free at 4 in the morning.. so its not that tight. i started to black oout on some parts.. but i guess its worth a listen.. drop some feedback/comments and a link........
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08-23-03, 04:48 PM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
fuck I always forget to post the link....
hi fi http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=525627&q=Hi lo fi http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=525627&q=Lo www.soundclick.com/squad - if both fail |
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08-23-03, 07:30 PM
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IP: F3DB 4891
wasn't feelin this one.....the VOLUME IS LOW.....I'M TALKIN ABOUT REALLY LOW.....from wat i can hear, your production and quality was kinda good, vocal presence was good, delivery was good but your flow was off beat at sum points, you gotta work on that....lyrics were just ehh....nuttin new to me .... try writing a rhyme to this beat tho, then really record it as a song or sumtin, this way you'll be more organized feel me....stay up....OnE
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08-23-03, 09:10 PM
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IP: CEF5 716F
^lol i know. dont trip postman gonna deliver
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08-24-03, 07:28 AM
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IP: 34CC 62F0
Honestly, I thought you were still talking when you began spittin' that freestyle, but after the first line, I was following it.. The beat isn't my style at all, you had a good flow in the beginning, although your flow fell offbeat/offpoint MAJORLY in the middle of this drop.. Although, you picked it up by the end of it.. Decent freestyle, "I'm like an apple, the way I'm cracking your adams." Eh.. Anyway, HIGHER volume.. That's the last of what I need to say.. Keep doing you and elevate off of your own words..
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